I want to be your beta! I’m kidding but not. I wish I could but no time and yet your chapters are such a perfect length, not too long at all. You have a line that made me smile throughout the rest of the chapter: and fell into sink behind her. For some reason I thought that was cute. But enough already, I will not mention misspelled words again after this review. On to what I thought of this chapter.

I’m really intrigued by this alcoholic Storm, haven’t seen that done before and originality scores extra points with me. I love how you have Logan out of the loop like that, a very thoughtful and realistic move that. I’m intrigued with the slew of characters you’re introducing at a steady and comfortable pace. And I love the contacts! Yay! It’s the only way to rectify their ‘oversight’ – how hard would it have been to stick blue contacts in someone’s eyes? But I digress. I’m not sure what Logan means when he: “wish he had stayed and left.” Or, regarding Scott: he couldn’t speak currently – totally lost me there.

Plots are everywhere and I really, really like that. Logan’s wedding band with a foreign word inscribed on it, a resurrection, Trask, Mags, Wanda, Marie! I mean wow! My hats off to you, it’s amazing all the things going on. Yes, I’m quite intrigued.