Date: 10-14-07 - 02:21 am Title: Going For Broke
This is a great story, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 07-15-07 - 08:42 pm Title: Going For Broke
ok I'm hooked...
Date: 07-09-07 - 06:57 pm Title: Going For Broke
Ali tickled me, and I love Scott's reactions to her, particularly him being tongue-tied. I can't wait to watch Ororo and Logan playing "soccer mom/soccer dad" and see what other silly things happen to them in their suburban setting. Might have to go back and read this through again, which I certainly don't mind!
Date: 04-06-07 - 03:15 am Title: Going For Broke
Me like
Author's Response: :D Glad to see you do! More to come.
Date: 03-22-07 - 05:26 am Title: Going For Broke
My reaction to this story was to smile the whole time while reading...damn never had that happen before. LOL! Anyhoo, I can't wait tosee who the significant others are.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad your enjoying this. This is making me smile too. The cameos and supporting characters are gonna be a riot.
Date: 03-21-07 - 11:21 pm Title: Going For Broke
Logan is a friendly sort of fellow, isn't he? Him being financially strapped and boinking the principal made me think of Forest Gump, "Your momma sure does care about your schooling, son."
Please don't let T'Challa be Lucas' father! Please!
This is really good, Reiko.
Author's Response: Lol! I didn't mean for that to happen. But good eye. Laura is really smart tho, and she got a scholarship to the school. As for Luc's paternity...I'm sorry.
Date: 03-21-07 - 09:17 pm Title: Going For Broke
Logan's quite the Ladies Man in this fic. But when isn't he a lady killer? And I see "Legs" has captivated him. Is T'Challa Lucas' father or is it Bishop? And who is Laura's mother? Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Logan is so all about the ladies. Lol, like when is he not. Silver Fox is Laura's Mum. Cee thought that shoulda been how in Marvel, and I couldn't agree more. Talk about a missed oppurtunity. And yea, *sigh*, T'Challa is Bishop's father in this fic...:(
Date: 03-21-07 - 05:21 pm Title: Going For Broke
This was hysterical. Change of topic, change of topic...
So many good lines. "Hi. I'm Pissed Off."
I love the direction you took this in. It will be next to impossible to follow, since you already thought of all kinds of good stuff that escaped me! Doesn't mean I won't try! And that "four states of Killer Tears" was inspired.
Author's Response: You know you always do good. Glad you liked it. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Date: 03-21-07 - 04:34 pm Title: Going For Broke
Roundrobin nooo you gotta finish it because it's such a great start. I'm impressed with this one and would like to see what you come up with next.
Great JOB
Rolletti
Author's Response: Aw :blush: Thanks! But you should check out Ain't No Business too. I thought more people would grab on, but Cee answered the call and it turned out to be great fun! It was awesome writing a story not knowing what was gonna happen next. I was hoping that more people would chime in again. But if not, Cee will, RIGHT right right? I'm so awesomely subtle. :D
Date: 03-21-07 - 12:36 pm Title: Going For Broke
Good start. I look forward to seeing more.
Author's Response: Tank ye so much. you defiantly will.
Date: 03-21-07 - 12:31 pm Title: Going For Broke
Very cute! I hope someone continues this soon!
Author's Response: Aww, I wanted to write about little kids for the longest time. I keep hearing stories of other people's kids and how adorable they are. It was a total inspiration.