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Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-06-07 - 03:28 am Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up

“When I Grow Up, I Want to Be Barbie – That Bitch Has Everything.”

That is so funny and true!

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-27-07 - 05:01 pm Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up

Both chapter one and two are great. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Reiko let me give her current chapter a quick beta read two days ago, and it is a lot of fun. It will be put up soon, as her time allows, and as we come up with other things we want to do with the story. Suggestions are welcome, by the way! Thanks, Dragon.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-24-07 - 08:19 pm Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up

Cute interlude with Logan and his daughter. I thought I would fall on the floor laughing when his daughter mentioned disliking Jean. Good chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Burnz. Reiko will bring on the comedy as this goes along, since this is her baby, but some of the sappy parent moments might jump from my pen once in a while! Little girls are sometimes more blunt when their single dads date a woman they don't like. If Logan is smart, he might listen!

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-23-07 - 01:21 am Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up

This is so cute! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Reiko gets to decide what happens next! It's her turn. Glad you are enjoying this. Suggestions are welcome, Tiger.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-23-07 - 12:18 am Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up

Logan getting his daughter ready was too cute. I love father/daughter moments. I'm looking forward to the bowling lessons.

Author's Response: Reiko gets to write those lessons! Logan getting his kid ready isn't too different from any other parent. I have to jump through hoops with mine!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-22-07 - 11:08 pm Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up

AWwwwwwwwwwwwwww. I love little kids in stories. Eeee, so kawii. I can't wait to get to that little diddy about how Laura gets her nickname. And I just thought of a great way to have Lucas get his too.

This was a great piece. I love your speed writtin. It always rocks. The wrestlers, toys, Hulk "he's OLD" BWAHAHahahahaa, Brooke is cool LOL, the Eagles pillow!!!! Fanfriggintastic. I love the idea of bowling as the play date.

Wow, I got my work cut out for me. So I'm gonna tag the next chapter :D

Author's Response: yup. Take this and run with it. I considered the park again, but wanted to put Logan in a setting where he could wisecrack and be smug. Go for it!!!

Reviewer: irish_sunset Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-22-07 - 09:50 pm Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up

Classic...Logan driving a FORD ESCORT! Too freakin hilarious...love it love it Mentioning the wrestlers someone after my own heart.

Author's Response: Hey, Reiko mentioned he used to have a chopper, and he wasn't able to accommodate that anymore. Guy needed a family car. I was that close to giving him a minivan!!!! Glad you liked the wrestlers. My sons are addicted to WWE and the toys.

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