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Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-07 - 01:18 am Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One

Trouble in the paradise of the Summers home hunh? It is so cute that Nate has a crush on Ororo. :)

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-06-07 - 06:15 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One

There's nothing quite like your boss walking into your office to make you get off the internet...

Anyway, Nate asking Ororo out for dates is hilarious! I can seriously picture that. Looks like little Rachel is following in her mothers footsteps; manipulating men to get what she wants. I feel for Scott.

This was really good, Reiko.

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-06-07 - 06:01 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One

I can't believe I didn't see this updated! How come Scott can't ever cheat on Jean? It would serve her right. She's always getting nooky on the side, while he's at home either being cluelessly stupid, or silently fuming.

Even though I am anxious to read the next part, take your time honey. We understand.

Author's Response: Scott has his priorities straight and that includes putting himself last. Jean selfishness is actually taking away from herself. She's gonna learn that sooner or later. Thank you for your thoughts, Mum and me appreciate them. She loved this site to pieces. She wished it was around back in the day.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-06-07 - 04:55 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One

lol seems like Rachel has taken after her mother in more ways than one. So cute how Nate has a crush on Ororo! I feel a bit bad for Scott though...

Can't wait for the rest, but life comes first. I wish you and your family the very best.

Author's Response: It's weird seeing Rachel's name, because my name is Rachel. But, yea, Rachel and Nathan take after their Mother and Father, respectively, in ways. Scott has some insecurity issues that have never been addressed. Hopefully they will be soon...

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-06-07 - 01:46 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I sure will. Stick around!

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-06-07 - 03:33 am Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One

Poor Scott. Always the chump. *so* cute that Nate asks 'Ro out every time he sees her.

Author's Response: Lol, Scott just needs the right incentive to whip out his obnoxiously large balls. And he will. Lol, Nate takes after his Dad...in a way.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-05-07 - 07:22 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One

Made me giggle all the way through. It's nice to see a fic where Scott isn't totally clueless. You captured an afternoon at the Summers' home very well. I can't wait to read the rest.

And I've told you before, but you have my deepest condolences. It'll get better with time. :-)

Author's Response: Glad to make you laugh. This isn't a story with a direct linear plot. It's liquidy and free forming. In other words, its being made up as we go along. The Summers' are one of those nuclear families that is about to explode. :D Thank you for you condolences. I appreciate them. Writing comedy helps, alot.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-05-07 - 04:53 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One

It's fun seeing this uploaded! I had forgotten about that line with Ororo sticking his privates in a socket...

All right. Take your time writing up that other piece that you mentioned, kid. Can't wait! Talk soon.

Author's Response: I'm responding to reviews really late, but I am reading them, promise. I had that "privates in a socket" line in my head for a while and finally found a neat place to put it. Got some other ideas will drop you a line soon, k.

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