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Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 11:53 pm Title: Seven and Ten Split: Part Two

Can I have her outfit? Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 08:31 pm Title: Seven and Ten Split: Part Two

next chapter will no doubt be interesting with logan, ro, jean, scott and the kids....should be interesting

Reviewer: Chanel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 04:51 pm Title: Seven and Ten Split: Part Two

I love this story. I can't wait for you to make another post with Logan and Ororo together in the next chapter!!!

LOVE IT!!!

Reviewer: VenomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 02:09 am Title: Seven and Ten Split: Part Two

more please?

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 12:47 am Title: Seven and Ten Split: Part Two

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: nemesisbecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 12:24 am Title: Seven and Ten Split: Part Two

Just finished. Nice update.

Reviewer: nemesisbecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 12:23 am Title: Seven and Ten Split: Part Two

Did you mean "Lucky Strikes"?

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-18-07 - 11:45 pm Title: Seven and Ten Split: Part Two

I had a good laugh through this entire chapter. Poor Ororo will have to deal with bickering kids and the Logan/Jean crap. I look forward to seeing Logan uncomfortable. lol

Cute connection with the chess game and Lucas' name. I smiled at that. :-)

Reviewer: Anjeline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-18-07 - 11:01 pm Title: Seven and Ten Split: Part Two

hey! i see u mentioned Lucky Strikes! do u live in Torrance CA?? we have that here too! good chapter!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-18-07 - 08:34 pm Title: Seven and Ten Split: Part Two

Of course I love this. I will add on toit today or tomorrow, or just send you my draft first. I sent changes to punctuation before I even read this here, I replied to your email, so thanks for that! Lucas is believable. And it is nice to see the bond Ororo has with her preteen son. Reminds me a bit of my son Max.

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