Nicely done, Cee! Loved Ororo's scolding of Logan. I could just imagine him listening to her with a casual look an' taking that step backward with an amused grin on his face. Love your descriptions too. Your chapters are full and satisying... oh wow, I guess you're my Snickers . lolol Great job. --W6C

Author's Response: That look on both of their faces was what appealed to me when I pictured it and wrote it, so I'm glad you liked it! Snickers? Bless your heart, now THAT'S a compliment! Thanks!

Well, I've said it before and will probably continue to say it but no one, no one writes details like you. It's as if you're there seeing, breathing, living all Logan is. But it's hard for me to imagine Logan in a nursing home, especially putting up with it so I'm very intrigued to see how that happened.

Raven was interesting to say the least and I can see how she could end up there since she seems long lived too. Is there no Xavier's where he could grow old? Does the school exsist? I'm full of questions, most espcially how Ororo passed.

One last thing, the details. I can't say I understood a lot of the technical names for things in chapter one. I know it's due to my own ignorance of medical terms but it left me wondering exactly just what some of the things were. But then I've no idea how you could really feasibly explain each technical term. Again, it's very well written and it's obvious you've had experience in these things which make it all the more real.

Oh, I can't end without saying your output of late has been really phenomenal. I can't keep up! It reminds me a bit of Batman Wolverine when he was around. Digressing, I pm'ed him to see if he was okay but he never responded. Hoping he's all right and hoping your writing's therapeutic for you.



Author's Response: Hey, D. Glad you had the chance to read this. Yeah, I've been a scribbling fool, knocking out chapters when the mood hits me. The school's status is up in the air. Still plotting an outline for his tenure with the X-men, not so much with the school itself. Remember, he is in a nursing home where they know he is a mutant, but he is one of a dying breed. Dying more slowly than most, but you get the basic drift. I also miss BW. I miss hearing the male voice and perspective that he brings to Wolverine, as well as his dialogues. Perhaps he will visit when he is in the mood. Thanks for the review.

Loved every bit of this chapter. Matt, the Logan/Scott interaction, Ororo telling Logan off, etc. Everything was great. And your attention to detail makes me smile. *sigh* I look forward to more chapters like this one.

Author's Response: for whatever the reason, the details tend to rear their heads before I imagine what I want the characters to say and do. Don't know why. Glad you enjoyed this, madam! Scott and Logan will have more reason to snipe at each other soon (I hope).

lol so cute! I love how she told him off and then stormed off. I love the story time with Matt too :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Tiger! I like 'Ro in the old Uncanny stories, since she was usually elegant even when she was ticked off.