[Report This]Date: 10-05-07 - 09:11 am Title: Room to Breathe
A very, very good chapter, Cee. I love how you bring the elements of the beginning of Uncanny into the story. You've done a really, really good job.
Author's Response: Thank you, Darlene, and you know I love hearing that from you. Good to hear from you today!
[Report This]Date: 10-01-07 - 09:38 am Title: Room to Breathe
Another story of your's I'm in love with :) I made it to chapter 6 so far.
Damn, Logan in a nursing home, that took a while to get used to. The last line of chapter 1 made my eyes water... "Home with Ro." That sounded so damn lost and lonely. How long is he waiting to finally be with her again? That's so sad.
It's funny how Matt was looking more and more forward to spending time with Logan. An unloved task became something that made his whole day :) Like him I can't wait how this tale unfolds! So far it has been fantastic!
Logan constantly swatting at the gnat, Scott taking it out effortlessly - priceless :D Logan's smug attitude, Ro ranting at him... That whole scenario had me grinning widely here.
Men, give them beer and they are happy *rolls eyes* ;) Logan taking Ro's hand in the dark temple to reassure her was a nice moment. I also loved his growling whenever one of the other guys came too close to Ro (or vice versa) for his liking. Moira is a riot! Totally love her! Great moments when they kept surprising each other with their respective abilities :)
Ro snuggled up to Logan on that ice raft was nice, too bad she hurried away as soon as she was fully awake ;) The girl talk - perfect! So funny! Ro's the center of male adoration, I like that. Too bad Logan wasn't there when she came into the room in that nice dress. Nah, it was probably for the best. I doubt simple growling would have done the job this time LOL
Loved how Ro got between Warren and Logan before things got out of control. I wonder how things go from here for Ro and Logan. Right now they are pretty pissed... err... soaked. LOL
But since there's another chapter already, I shall soon know, yay :D Can't wait!
Author's Response: I know how little time you have to read, so I'm really glad you liked this, Steph! Thanks for the review that made me smile, and telling me the details that you liked. I love Ro snuggling with Logan on the ice raft, too! There will be more eventually.
[Report This]Date: 08-30-07 - 04:13 pm Title: Room to Breathe
*chuckles* That was awesome. I love the behind the scenes "girl talk" with Ro an' Jean that we weren't privy to the first time it was in print. That's one o' my all time favorite scenes... Logan mindin' his own business, the li'l redhead shakin' her tail in front of him just enough to cause some trouble... that gal loves the attention an all the boys throwin' down because of her. Great handling of Logan's character, as usual. Actually great handlin' of all the characters...... I still love your Moira better than the original Uncanny version though. Nice job. Bravo, my friend. --- W6C
Author's Response: I love writing girl talk in most of my stories, so I'm glad you liked that part. Ororo saying "smack your own mouth" also came from the women in my family, I glean a lot of phrases from them when I write. I like Logan's character, and since you always write him so well yourself, I value what you think! And your latest update rocked. Moira will be back next chapter, don't worry.
[Report This]Date: 08-30-07 - 03:30 pm Title: Room to Breathe
How did you sneak three updates of this thing past me?! Anyhow i still LOVE this story. You managed so many characters very well in the escape scenes, not many writers can do that. Now i can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response: I'm particularly glad you liked this one, Ana, since you were the one who issued the challenge with the song. I always enjoy your feedback. Thanks for visiting!
[Report This]Date: 08-30-07 - 01:49 pm Title: Room to Breathe
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ororo is so kick ass....LOL I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks, kiddo. Glad you liked it! I like it when Ororo kicks ass, too!
[Report This]Date: 08-30-07 - 01:49 am Title: Room to Breathe
very cute!
Author's Response: *grin* thanks!
[Report This]Date: 08-30-07 - 01:40 am Title: Room to Breathe
I wonder what Logan meant in his parting words to Warren.... It's good that 'Ro got her two cents in with Logan. I'm surprised Scott didn't chain Jean to the bed after her being gone and in danger for so long. Looking at what happened with Jean it may have been better if he did. Good chapter!
Author's Response: Now see, I'll have to go back and read those parting words again...hmmmm. Scott tried his darndest, but she told him she needed some air, that minx. We'll see what happens. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 08-30-07 - 01:38 am Title: Room to Breathe
yet another lovely chapter to a tale that i'm really growing to love. the original uncanny storyline is a great one to explore, and i absolutely adore the way you've tweaked with it -- exactly how i've always wanted it to read! already excited for the next update...
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for the review! I like the idea of "behind the scenes" stuff that I wish had happened in Uncanny issues back then. I might revisit that a little as it continues. I'll try to update soon!
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