I don’t know if I mentioned this before but despite its updated modern edge his story is so nostalgic I can’t help but like it. I really, really like the way you show Kitty and Ororo together. I think a lot of people forget they were so close something that never happened between Kitty and Jean. When you look back over the years everyone turns to Ororo and never Jean. I actually didn’t want Jean to go to the movies with them.

Kitty’s so much a youngster in this story just as she be, you write her well. And I see what you mean about how you’ve used Emma’s affect on Ororo. I think the things Emma did to Ororo would never be forgotten much less forgiven so I always see them as antagonists.

You know it’s funny now after all these years to think about who cleans the mansion and that Moria would – Doctor MacTaggart, housekeeper extraordinaire. Just wanted to say that. It's good to be back online and able to read again. Going to bed now and will finish tomorrow most likely.


Author's Response: Moira was a riot. She was a Jane of all trades, something I laugh about now. I like bringing in elements of the eighties with this story, just because I'm nostalgic. There will be more crazy stuff with Jean coming up. Thanks for the reviews, woman, I love getting them from you. Kitty will develop more eventually, but not too fast.

Arg, my first review disappeared. Pooey. N e waze, I love this story. I feel so bad for Ro. She's the plot's punching bag. *sniff* Love Kitty, and Petey, and stuff.

I have more to say but it was all in my first review. Wah


Author's Response: it's true, you're right; she is the punching bag so far in this story. but usually, it's Logan. Just because he can survive ten thousand bullets, Marvel, doesn't mean you should make him so that, issue after issue...but I digress. Glad you like Kitty and Piotr. Their romance won't figure too much into this story until much, much later. Thanks for reviewing, Rachel. Love hearing from you. And I miss Playdates!!!

yay! i'm so glad you've added another chapter to this! i love all your fics, but this one has a special place in my heart, since i absolutely love these early comics. i've often thought long and hard about how they could be 'ro'lo'd up,' so to speak, and i think you've done a magnificent job with it thus far. looking forward to see how things unfold with the scary FoH people!

Author's Response: oboy! that's a great review! thanks!!! Yeah, I am trying to RoLo up the old issues by Claremont, since there was always a scant undercurrent of their relationship in those story arcs, at least when the comic wasn't the Scott and Jean Show. We'll see what I can do next. Thanks for reading.