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Reviewer: Nienna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-08 - 06:20 am Title: Right Outside the Window

This is one long a$$ story but it is really really good too!

Author's Response: Shoot, I have a whole mess of long a$$ stories on this site. But thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-15-08 - 02:06 am Title: Right Outside the Window

I was just reading some of the old comics but I don't recall Angus so I'm curious to see what's next. I always like how you show the closeness between Ororo and Jean, as I said you do relationships really well. Reading the old comics it was intriguing to see Jean change when I knew what was coming and it's that way with your story. I definitely sense a Dark Phoenix story coming up and that's something I'm really looking forward to.

Author's Response: He was just a guy who had it in for Moira for letting the X-Men destroy his vessel. He was basically just a vessel himself for Proteus to possess...oops. Gave away a plot bunny...There will be Phoenix coming up, but not necessarily in space.

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-03-08 - 10:46 am Title: Right Outside the Window

Yay! You spoil me so. An update of this as well as "The Getaway" , woot!

Lets see. My, my, my, Jean's becoming a little problem isn't she? Not only interfering with developing RoLo but also Moira too.

I liked the small RoLo scene on the plane, as well as the trepidation, you've been giving us so far about Jean's waning control and sensibility with her powers. I honestly can't imagine what it would feel like to gain that much power and control over such a short period of time, would actually do to a person, because honestly the god complex wouldn't really be too far off.

I'm interested in seeing what happens when the Phoenix fully develops and the other's reactions to it. Namely, Scott and Ororo's reactions. Also how much of the phoenix storyline you'll delve into.

Either way some hot stuff coming in the future and I can't wait. Later hon!

Author's Response: I've been trying not to let this story be a Jean/Logan/Ororo tug of war, but it keeps bending that way. There will be Phoenix in this, certainly, but there is going to be a lot of other stuff developing, and more character developments too, from different players. Thanks for the review!

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