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Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-29-07 - 03:22 pm Title: chapter 2

Ok its official I'm 'thick'...ok I get the Jean/Logan thing now...sorry wasn't expecting that:) Great so far...off to read more.

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-29-07 - 03:15 pm Title: chapt 1

I'm confused...what was Logan and Jean doingt hat kept him up all night?

Reviewer: VEnomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-28-07 - 09:29 pm Title: chapter 3

Keep it coming. Jealousy green is not a good color on Logan.

Reviewer: rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-28-07 - 04:08 am Title: chapter 3

Awwww this was so short. But I liked it. I just knew Logan was going to walk in on them and throw Raul out the door, after he dragged him down the many stairs of the mansion. LOL Update soon please, I would like to know how this impossible situation is going to turn into a ROLO. :)

Rolletti

Reviewer: danny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-27-07 - 08:34 pm Title: chapter 3

Good short chapter.
Don't forget to have Jean appear in the next chapter. How will she feel with Logans change of heart.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-26-07 - 08:53 pm Title: chapt 1

I liked this! Ororo with another man and Wolverine jealous....yeah,..I like VERY much. I say Ororo and Raul become lovers. Wolverine will get even more jealous and finally fully turn towards Ororo and focus on her instead of Jean. Yep, Wolverine won't like it, but....tough! If he wants her, he will have to exert himself in romance and making himself clear. Just don't let Wolverine kill Raul....he's too hot for that (smile). But yeah, let Ororo have a lover while Wolverine fights for her.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am very fond of Raul and I would like to keep him around when Ororo gets lonely (wink). But this is definately a Rolo fic. But Woverine is definately going to have to work hard to get Ororo. Have a great weekend! Thanks again for the review.

Reviewer: Sade Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-03-07 - 05:03 pm Title: chapter 2

Muwahahahahahaha poor little Jean...........

Author's Response: I feel the same way. Hee hee!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-03-07 - 03:52 pm Title: chapter 2

This was good! Funny that Jean set up Raul's little visit and tryst with 'Ro to get Logan to herself. Cleverly done, since I didn't really see that in the first chapter. Still have some crazy spellings going on in here, and a bit of puntuation that needs fixing, but the story itself is a lot of fun and easy to read in terms of length and dialogue. Good work.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. (Sorry about the spellings) I hope you like the next chapter.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-03-07 - 01:18 pm Title: chapter 2

Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to find out what thoughs really good ideas for the next chapter are so UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Hey! Sorry for the question marks all over the darn story I don't know what happend?

Reviewer: Darkdevil75k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-02-07 - 07:46 pm Title: chapt 1

Like your story! It reminds me of a certain La, cajun
tall, good looks, sly, and can charm the birds out
of the trees. If he wanted to. Remy had a pass too,
I wonder what's the deal with Raul? Keep writing
I like to see a part 2 to this.


Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review. I have something special planned for Raul. But I don't want to give anything away yet........

Reviewer: VenomQueen2002 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-02-07 - 01:40 am Title: chapt 1

Oh my! This is a great story, I love the latin lover in ro's life, giving wolvie a run for his money. He is hot and the situation is hot. I think Ro and Raul should become an item or friends. Maybe Raul has a sister who pays him a visit and fall head over heels for Wolverine.

Author's Response: Hmmmmmm. I like your idea. I wonder how Red would react to this? And Ororo? This is going to be wickedly fun. Thanks for the great idea

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-30-07 - 02:44 pm Title: chapt 1

I like this. It was hot and full of things going on, Logan, Red, Ro, Raul and now new feelings realized. I can't help but say there are a slew of misspelled words. Your for you're, sent for scent but that said it's still a good read and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: That's what I get for writing the story on my blackberry. Thanks for the feed back. If you have any ideas for the next chapter please let me know.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-29-07 - 07:15 am Title: chapt 1

Hmmmm. Hot tango instructor...

oh, goodie.

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-29-07 - 02:52 am Title: chapt 1

Nice, I can't wait for the "talk."

Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review. I hope you like chapter 2.

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-28-07 - 10:44 pm Title: chapt 1

oh sh--. this is short, sweet and hot.
can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: Thanks. It's funny how I came up with the spanish tango instructor. He is actually based on my instructor and friend. (But only friend) I know I'm bad.....

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