Better and better indeed!

Author's Response: Thank ya Thank ya :)

I love the character names, and I enjoyed Bishop's reaction to Ororo last chapter. Also, what's a halberd? I know some medieval terms just from reading Conan novels for years, but that one escapes me. This story is creative and moves at a good pace, making me ask "what's gonna happen next?" as you add more to it. Keep watching the punctuation, and let me know if you need a beta. The paragraph spacing is much nicer, too, by the way.

Author's Response: thank ya much Cee :) I would be more than happy if would like ot beta these, but i am new to fan fiction so i am not sure how to go about it lol and Pari opened my eyes to the spacing, i wasnt thinking. A halberd is a pike type weapon. it has the shaft of a spear but the head of a axe with a curved blade on the back of the head and a long point on top. they were used mainly to dismount calvary but guards were known to use them as well