Let's revisit that talk we had about me helping you to beta for spelling and punctuation again! That's the only flaw in this excellent, wonderful story. I'm enjoying it so much, because I love sword and sorcery stories anyway, but every character in here samples well from the Marvel canon, but they are also appealing as Dark Ages heroes and villains. Logan's line to Creed about his mother was perfectly in character! Magnus is delightfully creepy, more of him, please!

I like Logan's impressions of Ororo; beautiful images and I liked those bits of verse, giving us the impression that he's already smitten with her.

You're a sweetie, thanks for the bio I peeked just to see if you'd respond. You sound like a complete darling. A man that claims his step children like you do is definitely a real man in my eyes, lucky kids, lucky wife too. Thanks again now update! ;D

Author's Response: Come on now Ogres aint suppose to blush lolThat is very kind of you to say Darlin, and i thank you deeply for it. I have never once doubted the fact that i am a blessed man to have the family i do. Corse i m also lucky because they put up with me i mean i do hog the first player controller to the gamecube all the time lol

Well, I'll admit I was skeptical of this story at first, but your plot line and writing skills prove me wrong; I'm hooked. :) Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Im very glad that i could win ya over :)