Date: 06-19-07 - 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
A longer chapter than usual but still an easy read and tons of things going on. I think what I most liked about this chapter was Bishop. Am wondering what/who Mags is dealing with, reminded me of "He-who-must-not-be-named" in some aspect. I really like this story even though it's taken me a while to find the time to read through each chapter. I'm trying to get caught up on a lot of other stories as well and it's taking a while.
Date: 06-08-07 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
Once again, you've made me like Bishop! Awesome!
Creed's skeevy! I've heard of a carder, so that was cool. The other devices made me cringe.
Good work, good research, and great characterizations yet again.
Date: 06-08-07 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
This is a great chapter. It showed that you did your research on the medievel devices. I can't wait to see who Magmus really works for and what his plan truly is. I especially can't wait until Logan and Ororo finally meet each other. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank ya much, I had to do a bit of lookin for the stuff but i am a roleplaying geek so ii knew a bit of it anyway lol