I like this. A lot! :)
Magnus is creeping me out. Was it really the Northmen who killed the Queen? It wouldn't surprise me if Magnus was behind it...
Gads, I'm glad Bishop got there in time before Creed could use those things on Logan. Ouch ;)
I love Ro's dreams, btw :D
Scott and Jean are cute, trying to hide desperately what's going on between them, but failing miserably.
Loved when Logan caught a glimpse of Ro and thought of an angel. Loved it even more when their eyes meet in the temple and both couldn't take their gazes away.
So, what favor might Ro ask of Remy? Getting that sexy Barbarian out of prison I hope ;)

Finally! It's always a pleasure when they meet and sparks fly. I really, really liked the way you described Ororo's unique scent, very original and lovely. I love the idea of the Barbarian and the Storm goddess, so completely different and yet irresistibly drawn to each other, the stuff of great romance!

Well, now that I'm finally caught up I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. Remy! Squee!

weird. My original review didn't go through.

But in the meantime, I didn't mention it yesterday, but I love the scene in the healing temple when Logan and Ororo meet eyes. Very romantic, and a nice touch. You should post this link to windrider1fic on Yahoo, too, or on any other group that you belong to. It's worth reading!