[Report This]Date: 06-19-07 - 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love stories like this. I guess I’ve never been much of a frilly emotional girl with the need for all the extra details about clothes and things such as their friends and their friend's emotional needs and concerns even though I like the other X-Men. I guess what I mean is that I like good bare bones RoLo in a simple but imaginative and fun style which I think you have. I can enjoy a long wordy story but the kind you’re putting out seem to be my favorites, easy to read, full of enjoyment and just so refreshing, something I should remember more often regarding my own writing and probably why I enjoy guys stories so much. Yup, this one goes into my favorites too.
[Report This]Date: 06-19-07 - 06:15 am Title: Chapter 7
i love a lady who knows what she wants and goes out and gets it, if jeannie is the one gives the favor i know that ro and logan are a done deal
[Report This]Date: 06-17-07 - 10:15 am Title: Chapter 4
Well if you gotta go out best to go out spitting, eh? Curious to see what Pierce plans to do with our Logan.
Author's Response: Thats what my grandpa taught me, go out kickin and spittin lol
[Report This]Date: 06-17-07 - 10:01 am Title: Chapter 3
Very interesting turn of events here. I adore Remy and think you got him to a perfect Tee! Amusing, flirty and rascally. I also really like the way you described his eyes, very original, like that a lot.
Very interesting twist with the 'siblings', very unexpected. I'm curious who their father is though. So, another intriguing chapter!
[Report This]Date: 06-17-07 - 09:20 am Title: Chapter 2
Better and better indeed!
Author's Response: Thank ya Thank ya :)
[Report This]Date: 06-15-07 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter 1
this is fast becoming one of my favorite stories and had to commend you on your research i can actually visualize the scenes. ororo and logan are destined for each other i wonder if they will have to fight to be together or will they allow fate to play against them
Author's Response: Thank ya much :) I always thought that anything worth having ya had to fight fate for.
[Report This]Date: 06-13-07 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
weird. My original review didn't go through.
But in the meantime, I didn't mention it yesterday, but I love the scene in the healing temple when Logan and Ororo meet eyes. Very romantic, and a nice touch. You should post this link to windrider1fic on Yahoo, too, or on any other group that you belong to. It's worth reading!
[Report This]Date: 06-13-07 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for the thanks! And I'll take you up on the beer if it's a root beer! Glad you were able to use the chapter fixes. Let me know what else you have coming up, buddy! I have this on my favorites, so I got to read the link this morning.
Author's Response: IBC? MUG? Barq?
[Report This]Date: 06-08-07 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
Once again, you've made me like Bishop! Awesome!
Creed's skeevy! I've heard of a carder, so that was cool. The other devices made me cringe.
Good work, good research, and great characterizations yet again.
[Report This]Date: 06-08-07 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
Let's revisit that talk we had about me helping you to beta for spelling and punctuation again! That's the only flaw in this excellent, wonderful story. I'm enjoying it so much, because I love sword and sorcery stories anyway, but every character in here samples well from the Marvel canon, but they are also appealing as Dark Ages heroes and villains. Logan's line to Creed about his mother was perfectly in character! Magnus is delightfully creepy, more of him, please!
I like Logan's impressions of Ororo; beautiful images and I liked those bits of verse, giving us the impression that he's already smitten with her.
[Report This]Date: 06-08-07 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
This is a great chapter. It showed that you did your research on the medievel devices. I can't wait to see who Magmus really works for and what his plan truly is. I especially can't wait until Logan and Ororo finally meet each other. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank ya much, I had to do a bit of lookin for the stuff but i am a roleplaying geek so ii knew a bit of it anyway lol
[Report This]Date: 06-08-07 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter 5
As always, the eyes say it all. I love that!!!
Author's Response: Windows to the sould, i honestly belive that you can learn more about a person form thier eyes than anything else.
[Report This]Date: 06-07-07 - 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
You're a sweetie, thanks for the bio I peeked just to see if you'd respond. You sound like a complete darling. A man that claims his step children like you do is definitely a real man in my eyes, lucky kids, lucky wife too. Thanks again now update! ;D
Author's Response: Come on now Ogres aint suppose to blush lolThat is very kind of you to say Darlin, and i thank you deeply for it. I have never once doubted the fact that i am a blessed man to have the family i do. Corse i m also lucky because they put up with me i mean i do hog the first player controller to the gamecube all the time lol
[Report This]Date: 06-07-07 - 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am beyond intrigued with this story - despite the misspelling I have to add which says a lot for me. I love sword and fantasy tales like this and am really looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters. I've a four day weekend so I'll have more time to read it later - I'm at work right now - lol.
Now, if you don't mind me asking are you male? I always enjoy a male point of view regarding RoLo. And tell us something about yourself maybe? A little tibit in your profile perhaps? I always like to know a little something about fellow authors. And hey, it's belated but welcome to the group, I'm so glad you joined!
Author's Response: Thank ya much much Darlin :)
I updated my profile, i meant to do it earlier but dammit if i didnt forget. I am a guy, i couldnt make the beard work if not LOL. Im very happy ya like it this im gonna try to make into my epic..................im a sucker for those
[Report This]Date: 06-07-07 - 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what Creed will do to Logan and when Logan and Ororo will meet. Keep up the great work.
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