Date: 06-07-07 - 12:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Well, I'll admit I was skeptical of this story at first, but your plot line and writing skills prove me wrong; I'm hooked. :) Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Im very glad that i could win ya over :)
Date: 06-06-07 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. These four chapters have lots of energy and action. Hopefully, you will post the next chapter very soon.
Author's Response: Thank ya kindly the next few chapters will be coming quickly the bones are laid for them just got to add the meat to them
Date: 06-06-07 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter 4
This is kick ass, like a mix of Highlander, lord of the Rings and Hercules all in one. This is really great stuff.
Author's Response: Thank ya much as a matter of fact my inspiration for Logan in this came form a scene of highlander. The first shot of Kurgen on his horse was just to bad ass
Date: 06-05-07 - 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
Damn. Pierce killed Sam!!!!
Lots of young casualties already! I'm already worried Logan and the "Haze" he's feeling, but I can't wait to see what happens next. Magnus sounds pretty evil, too. Bring it on!
Author's Response: Ole Magnus is gonna be a mother in this i kid you not lol. I shall bring it
Date: 06-04-07 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is great! can't wait for more
Author's Response: you shall have it thank ya kindly :)
Date: 06-04-07 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Once again Bravo!!!
Author's Response: :bows: thank ya much :)
Date: 06-04-07 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
I LOVE THIS! Kitty and Logan fighting side by side as siblings is one more reason why I love this story. Remy offering the foot massage is cool, too, and in character!
Date: 06-03-07 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Cool! I like this a lot with the whole lotr feel to it and fantasy element and u update so fast!!
Date: 06-03-07 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE THIS!!!!
Author's Response: thank you very much im glad people are diggin it
Date: 06-03-07 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love the character names, and I enjoyed Bishop's reaction to Ororo last chapter. Also, what's a halberd? I know some medieval terms just from reading Conan novels for years, but that one escapes me. This story is creative and moves at a good pace, making me ask "what's gonna happen next?" as you add more to it. Keep watching the punctuation, and let me know if you need a beta. The paragraph spacing is much nicer, too, by the way.
Author's Response: thank ya much Cee :) I would be more than happy if would like ot beta these, but i am new to fan fiction so i am not sure how to go about it lol and Pari opened my eyes to the spacing, i wasnt thinking. A halberd is a pike type weapon. it has the shaft of a spear but the head of a axe with a curved blade on the back of the head and a long point on top. they were used mainly to dismount calvary but guards were known to use them as well
Date: 06-03-07 - 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
love the update! I can't wait for another one
Author's Response: they be coming fast as i can make the ideas click
Date: 06-02-07 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I'm hooked. What's next????!!
Author's Response: lol a whole lot of hell