[Report This]Date: 08-20-07 - 03:51 pm Title: Sure isn't Coffee and Doughnuts
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thank you Will do :)
[Report This]Date: 08-20-07 - 11:16 am Title: Sure isn't Coffee and Doughnuts
Wasn't Toombs the name of teh bounty hunter in Riddick? That's all I could picture, hee hee. Thanks for the update! This story is fun and action packed!
Author's Response: thanks windy glad ya liked:) and Toombs had started out as a differnt charecter but while i was doing the scene i thought about the guy form Riddick and couldnt resist throwing him in lol
[Report This]Date: 06-21-07 - 02:24 am Title: Another day Another Dime
omygosh this is so much fun i can't keep the smile off of my face while i am reading. logan is so whupped that ororo seems to all ways get the better of him. i know when these two get back together it is gonna blow up
Author's Response: Thank ya much :) I just hope they dont kill each other first vefore they get the chance hehe :)
[Report This]Date: 06-20-07 - 09:01 pm Title: Nothing like professional rivalry
This is fun! Something unique by way of RoLo and thoroughly entertaining. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks a boat load Windy i am really glad ya like it :)
[Report This]Date: 06-19-07 - 05:46 pm Title: Nothing like professional rivalry
Whoo Hoo! It’s on! I am so loving this story! Just gotta love that Deadpool. Storm’s hot but not quite as hot as his Golden Girl Bea, what a hoot. I think I would have liked to have seen Wade and Logan on the hunt together.
Author's Response: Dont worry you just may see that before it is all said and done :)
[Report This]Date: 06-19-07 - 02:12 pm Title: Nothing like professional rivalry
The supporting characters are as much fun as the leads, and Anna and Wade are worth reading, they play well off of each other in this story.
I like the fact that Ororo and Logan have a shared past in this, and I can't wait to see what happens when sparks flare between them in their ongoing rivalry, and through whatever other conflicts you throw their way. It seems like you have some great opportunities to set up a lot of romantic and physical tension between these two, something I love in a comedy adventure story that has a little romance in it. Good work. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh the tension will be a mo fo trust me lol I am glad ya like Wade to he is one of my favorites i hope i am doin him justice
[Report This]Date: 06-15-07 - 04:53 pm Title: Another day at the office
I was curious to see how the combination of Wade and Logan would work out when I read that he was meeting up with him in the first chapter but now – ah! Golden girls! Now that’s the nutty Deadpool I know and love! Projecting his love! So funny! Now that toothbrush comment made me squirm and yet how like Wade, eh? Any man that knows the Marvel universe so well will always has a soft spot in my heart.
OMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSH! She didn’t! Oh I’m at work hunched over my keyboard laughing as quietly as I can but dang – Badger? Oh no! Mongoose? LOLROTFLMBO!!! I am literally crying from laughing so hard, let me tell you, tears just running down my face! I’m loving this Storm!
Oooo, and yes Logan did put Forge right in his place! Yeefreakinghaw! And yes she did do a little Han Solo move on him but what a lovely twist! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!
Okay, finished this chapter and where’s the next? I need it like a fix! Please update ASAP! That said I have to tell you I really like your writing style. It’s uncomplicated and straight to the point which makes it refreshing to read. Also, no spelling mistakes that I could find. There were only a few minor mistakes, one in the last chapter and only one this chapter, the kind that happen when typing fast so you have improved immeasurably. It makes it all the more enjoyable to read, just a perfect delight to read! Splendidly done, Ogrenaught!
Author's Response: Deadpool is awesome hard to deny that, and puttin him with Logan as a "partner" just feels right. The han solo thing did come to mind but only thing i could think of when i wrote it was "GREEDO DID NOt SHOOT FIRST" lol. And I would love to be able to take credit for the reduction of mistakes but i owe that to CeeCee she has been doin a great job as my beta. Well with that said i will get the fix ready thank ya again Darlin :)
[Report This]Date: 06-15-07 - 03:30 pm Title: Another day at the office
I'm still dying over here about the part with Wade and that toothbrush.
Author's Response: Toothbrush through the head? Damn i got issues :)
[Report This]Date: 06-15-07 - 03:16 pm Title: Another day Another Dime
You’re a busy bee, reminds me a bit of our Batman-Wolverine of the derring- do stories. He had a spell where he was typing in his sleep – I’m positive he was, can’t think of any other way he put out so much work in such a short span.
What’s a Crim syns? The Hunter’s Guild sounds so cool.
I loved the bathroom scene – “Somebody who doesn’t wash his fucking hands.” I had to laugh at that, so many men don’t – why? ;D
And I thought, ‘Oh no he didn’t!’ when he smacked him on the ass and commented! Oh that was funny. This is hilarious and yet very captivating. You have wonderful genres, all which I’m very into.
Logan is so much fun in this, it’s cool fun! Hitting the semi-conscious perp’s head against the wall and rendering him cold again – hah! The coolness level is overwhelming to me! Just loving this.
I’m reviewing as I read so I just finished squealing – Wilson f***ing Fisk! I love it when Marvel characters are sprinkled in a story it’s the ultimate fangirl thrill for me!
Oooo, Toad! :D
Squee and double Oooooo – Storm! Well, after lunch I’ll read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank ya much Darlin, im glad ya diggin it. A Crim syn is short for criminal syndicate like Mafia or Yakuza. I love sprinkeling in a bit of differnt Marvel charecters into the mix adds flavor i think . All in all when i thought of this story it was mainly, Logan, bounty hunteer, space with a fraction of Boba Fett, that equals bad ass
[Report This]Date: 06-15-07 - 09:16 am Title: Another day Another Dime
*chuckles* Love the ending of this chapter. This was very interesting. I'm not usually into AU stuff but this was very well written and a relaxing read so it was easy to stay with it. Few stories of any type hold my attention and the fact that this one is an AU -and- a futuristic outer space genre -and- is holding my attention is quite a kudos for you. Great job. --- W6C
Author's Response: Thank ya much Im glad ya found something that you are not usually into to ya likeing. kind of cool to that it was by me lol :)
[Report This]Date: 06-15-07 - 01:45 am Title: Another day Another Dime
LOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEE It!!!
Author's Response: THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNK YOU :)
[Report This]Date: 06-15-07 - 01:09 am Title: Another day Another Dime
Like the story. Hope too see a part 2 with, Storm next too see what's she's up too.
Author's Response: Logan and Storm are not far from a big ole drag out. Thank ya much :)
[Report This]Date: 06-14-07 - 08:26 pm Title: Another day Another Dime
Logan and Anna are a riot! I like her when she's sassy instead of a damsel in distress. Good work. Sent you the other chapter this morning.
Author's Response: Thanks Cee :)
[Report This]Date: 06-14-07 - 07:18 am Title: Another day Another Dime
Cute! Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Thank ya it on the way
[Report This]Date: 06-14-07 - 02:43 am Title: Another day Another Dime
lol!!!! hahahahah
Author's Response: :)
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