This is a well-written story, and it stays on track; it's very focused on the plot without any redundancy or beating the usual theme of Ororo and Logan as a couple who can't quite come together over the head. Ororo's dream was a neat twist to bring to the table. I like that Rogue and Gambit are Ororo's close friends in this story. It was nice that you posted four chapters at once, too. Instant gratification, getting to read this much of the story instead of just a piece at a time. Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I have about 14 chaps ready to post but I wanted to do it in batches since I'm not done with the fic yet so keeping reading!!