Date: 06-28-08 - 11:58 pm Title: The Foruth Seal
Great first chapter. Never read a fic with Jubes and Ro as family. I read desperation too, and MAN was that sh** scary! Collie Intrasion...Just the thought sends shivers down my spine. Oh yeah, and I laughed out loud at the exchange between Ororo, and jubes in the beginning.
Author's Response: Thank ya much :) yep Ole Collie was my direct inspiration for what Sinister was gonna be like
Date: 07-18-07 - 06:02 pm Title: The Foruth Seal
OHHHH...I likey..can't wait to see what develops next!
Author's Response: it will be coming soon :)
Date: 07-14-07 - 03:23 pm Title: The Foruth Seal
I love it!
Author's Response: thank you glad you did :)
Date: 07-12-07 - 05:38 am Title: The Foruth Seal
And that's it? What a way to leave us hanging buddy! But again, it's different, fresh and I'm longing for the next chapter. I only wish I had your creative juices.
Author's Response: That is a huge complement Darlin thank you very much i have to say though that while my brain might go hyperacitive with ideas some time you have the really heart grabbing ones that i wait for in each one of your updates. Anyway i am really glad ya liked the chap thanks a ton :)
Date: 07-11-07 - 08:18 pm Title: The Foruth Seal
Oooh...interesting. Frankly I like how you protrayed the small town, and how everyone is "buddy buddy" in them. That's how most towns like that are...not the kind of places you really want to live in. For a few minutes I thought Logan was the sheriff...glad he isn't. Cant wait for another chapter...update!
Author's Response: My inspiration for this town came from where i used to live acutally. Even the house that Ro and Jubes live in is kind of like my old one, off away from a small town, except mine was on the bayou lol. Thank ya for reading it i hope i can hook ya with coming chapters :)
Date: 07-10-07 - 04:17 pm Title: The Foruth Seal
Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thank ya much and i will get it out soon :)
Date: 07-10-07 - 04:03 pm Title: The Foruth Seal
Something looks like it didn't take with the bold/centered tags...weird.
Other than that, this looks great. Can't wait to see what else you do with this story. I know you'll do a great job of writing Logan. Storm and Jubes are already very likable. Don't see them paired as sisters in any other fics I have read. The little spark between 'Ro and Nate looks like it will be interesting to read, too.
Author's Response: Thanks Cee I dont know what happend with the bod and center but no biggie :) I hope i do a good job with logan in this it will be a tad different incarnation
Date: 07-10-07 - 01:47 am Title: The Foruth Seal
Very creepy, and I Iove it.
Author's Response: Thank ya much i was goin for a nice creepy mood :)