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Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-06-07 - 07:52 pm Title: The Breaking

this reminds me a lot of the parts of The Crow that I've seen. It's creepy and usually I don't like stuff like this, but I have to say I like this a lot. Is Logan watching out for 'Ro through the crows or is she next? And is this going to be a RoLo or just have some Ororo/Logan moments like in this chapter?

I have no idea why I even asked those questions lol

Author's Response: lol aint never nothing wrong with askin questions :) but for now i think i will just say Wait and see :)

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-07-07 - 11:21 am Title: The Breaking

Now those two first chapters gave me the creeps. Creppy alley, creppy sheriff... and those two guys! *shudders* Call me in, I'm hooked :D *likes creepy*
I'm so glad Ro got saved in time! But there's still that creppy sheriff, eeek. I wouldn't want to live in a house deep in the woods with a guy like that running around...
Can't wait to read more of this! :)

Author's Response: lol glad ya liked it and you havent seen the full extent of the creepy yet

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-07 - 07:55 am Title: The Breaking

This reminded me of Ghost Rider a bit. Again, very original, very intriguing. This is fun, albeit a bit creepy. Keeps us guessing. I love the banter between Jubes and Ororo.

Author's Response: Thanks Darlin hope it hooks ya :)

Reviewer: Spaceroses Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-07 - 02:04 am Title: The Breaking

Eeee....creepy.....At least Logan (I think it's Logan) saved Storm ^^ -inner Rolo shipper grins crazily- Can't wait to see where this is going...methinks Strangers got some secrets up his sleeve.....

Author's Response: Oh yes he does indeed :) thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: Stormiegirl1999 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-07 - 01:23 am Title: The Breaking

Wow!

I don't know what to say except...DAYUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol Thank you :)

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-07 - 08:47 pm Title: The Breaking

Nicely put together. I liked it. :)

Author's Response: thank you very much :)

Reviewer: irish_sunset Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-07 - 08:36 pm Title: The Breaking

Oh shit! I'm extremely diggin this!

Author's Response: Thank you very much hope you like the rest

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-07 - 08:01 pm Title: The Breaking

Glad to see the tags took this time!

I'm still getting a kick out of Jubes, since she is pretty believable and has some great lines. The use of the crows is excellent, gives this a "The Raven" feel a la Edgar Allen Poe, or even the movie "The Crow." Good stuff. It's ironic that Ro had a bad feeling about the alley before, and that's where Logan showed up in this chapter.

Author's Response: Nevermore right ? lol Thanks Cee :)

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