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Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-08 - 12:56 am Title: The First Move

Whaaaat! Stetson wearin' -cigar smokin' stranger comes up to you when your on a double date and asks you to dance...you have 5 seconds hot shot . What do you do? What do you do?!
Oh that was too much. I can't wait to see what happens!

Also the scene with Warren...before was a, um, a...GROSS (Ew...pee and poo). I guess he is all goodness and light so that the thingies run away. Interesting scene and dialog.

Author's Response: lol glad ya like B :) got more coming soon and ill try to tone down the parts with things reliveing themselves lol

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-31-08 - 11:30 pm Title: The First Move

I'm having the hardest time getting my second review to show up, I could just scream! But that aside I'm really enjoying this. It's so mysterious. I love the quotes you have as well they really set the mood for your story. I really, really loved the moment Ororo became aware of Logan and oh how I love your Logan. He's so mysteriously hard core sexy! Love his terse style, it's so Logan, so perfect. Well done!

Author's Response: thanks a ton darlin i hope the coming chaps really hook ya cuase in a few its all going down hill

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-08 - 10:52 pm Title: The First Move

OMG!!! How dare you leave me waiting for more. LOL!! He asked her to dance with a "confused" Nate beside her. Now that's a sexy, bold man. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: lol forgive me the next chappy coming soon

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-08 - 02:48 pm Title: The First Move

You know I'm enjoying this! "What kind?"
"Wet."

That cracks me up each time I reread it. And yes, I reread your fics. Write on, Chet. Write on.

Author's Response: Hey i have reread several of your stories, several times lol

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-08 - 10:51 am Title: The First Move

I'm so confused, but it's okay! I really want to know what's going on, so update soon!!

YAY he asked her to dance!

Author's Response: Thanks tiger and i shall update soon and dont worry the answers will be coming soon :)

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-08 - 06:29 am Title: The First Move

Very cool story, don't stop writing now. Update soon. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you very much and i shall soon :)

Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-29-08 - 11:36 pm Title: The First Move

This is a new turn for Rolo, the ‘end-of-the-world’ type of fantasy that we haven’t seen outside the their usual X-Men lifestyle. I’m enjoying the ride your giving us with this story, every time I read it, it reminds me of a show I loved, Carnivàle. In fact it reminds me very much of Constantine….
The detail and dark feeling to this story is grabbing, in the way that makes you want more of the story. It is the type of story that is real to everyday people in ‘reality,’ with a touch of paranormal effect that you can’t shake off. I hope you continue to update, waiting for this chapter was well worth the wait.

Author's Response: Carnivale was also a favorite show of mine and i did want a bit of its feel for this . Ii am very glad you enjoy it :)

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-29-08 - 09:58 pm Title: The First Move

Glad to see this updated, it's one of my faves :)

Author's Response: thank you very much i am glad your are digging it :)

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