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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-02-08 - 09:12 pm Title: Eyes in the Dark

Clint Barton is in this fic. I’m not sure whether to squeal with delight, as he’s such a favorite of mine or groan in despair as he seems to like to cut himself and lick his own blood which isn’t a good sign that he’s on the right side I’m thinking. I like your cast though, like the little used characters so seldom seen in a RoLo. I love your descriptions too. And Ororo and Nate now that’s an old pairing no one does much with and of course went no where in Marveldom. I’m curious about Scott and Nate, father and son – they are related as such here aren’t they? And if so how old is Scott, old coot old?

Author's Response: yea sorry Darlin ole Clint aint a good guy in this, honestly though he is not a "good guy" in the mainstream either really he has the whole anti hero thing there too i always though but he is a great charecter i hope ya liked this one got more comin soon and scott and Nate are not father and son in this one just more of a best buddy at work type thing

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-08 - 01:12 am Title: Eyes in the Dark

Well huh? Didn't see her fallin' into bed with Nate. Hmm... Trouble is surely coming as is our lil' motorcycle guy. I wonder what will happen when the whole gang meets up. Good work. :)

Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-23-08 - 12:18 am Title: Eyes in the Dark

As i mentioned before, i enjoy this genre. I'm enjoying the detail that you put each chapter. The is slowly coming together and you add interesting spins to it by adding characters that we are familar with. Thank You for updating, and please continue with this story.

Author's Response: Thank you much R and yes i will be contiuing this story soon

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-08 - 04:01 am Title: Eyes in the Dark

BRAVO!!!! As always, the imagery is beyond amazing to me.

Author's Response: lool thank ya much Ang :)

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-08 - 09:28 pm Title: Eyes in the Dark

loved this chapter! It was a little hard to tell between the song lyrics and the story, but still, that made a very sweet (and interesting scene). I still can't wait to find out what's going on with the two sides and this job Logan has to do!

Reviewer: Angel24buffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-08 - 09:19 pm Title: Eyes in the Dark

This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. Please post the next chapter ASAP :)

Author's Response: Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank you very much A :) will have a new one soon

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-19-08 - 03:03 pm Title: Eyes in the Dark

Hey, Chet! Glad you got the chapter up, but there was one piece of revision that made it in by accident:

The stranger held its gaze and never flinched until he reached up and gripped it around the throat. The thing struggled under the iron grip and thrashed about, trying to break free. (note: don’t need grip twice. I like the visual)

Sorry about that! Talk to you soon. THis was still great!


Author's Response: lol dang i missed that one lol prblem solved though sorry about that :)

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