Date: 10-26-07 - 10:51 am Title: Once
Ahhhh! She left? No!!! Damn.
Loved this chapter! Soooo good. The banter, the love scene, everything. Mmmmhhhh, RoLo makes me happy. :D
But damn. LOL
Author's Response: only write what I know steph
Date: 10-25-07 - 10:18 pm Title: Once
she WHAT?!?!? No, no, no!! You wretch! Bring her back! Damn you. **pouts** Other than my immediate and vehement displeasure at the end of this chapter, I loved it. I was grinning with the banter, enjoying the love making and hoping the chapter wouldn't end anytime soon. **claps** :D Bravo!
Author's Response: well it was a flashback.......something to put in to explain a few things. And set the mood for the next chapter
Date: 10-24-07 - 03:07 pm Title: Once
Oh. My. Goodness.
Best line ever from a RoLo story:
"Storm, are you telling me you're here for a booty call?"
That had me rolling on the floor. That, and her response was classic. Priceless.
The love scene was hot without being sordid. I like the language in it, which gave detailed, pleasant images and left room for the dialogue, which was also hot. Keep this one coming.
Author's Response: thank you. Yeah I had a picture in my head of Logan on a coach with this expression on his face.
Date: 10-24-07 - 01:39 pm Title: Once
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.