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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-07 - 10:51 am Title: Once

Ahhhh! She left? No!!! Damn.
Loved this chapter! Soooo good. The banter, the love scene, everything. Mmmmhhhh, RoLo makes me happy. :D
But damn. LOL

Author's Response: only write what I know steph

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-25-07 - 10:18 pm Title: Once

she WHAT?!?!? No, no, no!! You wretch! Bring her back! Damn you. **pouts** Other than my immediate and vehement displeasure at the end of this chapter, I loved it. I was grinning with the banter, enjoying the love making and hoping the chapter wouldn't end anytime soon. **claps** :D Bravo!

Author's Response: well it was a flashback.......something to put in to explain a few things. And set the mood for the next chapter

Reviewer: CeeCee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-24-07 - 03:07 pm Title: Once

Oh. My. Goodness.

Best line ever from a RoLo story:

"Storm, are you telling me you're here for a booty call?"

That had me rolling on the floor. That, and her response was classic. Priceless.

The love scene was hot without being sordid. I like the language in it, which gave detailed, pleasant images and left room for the dialogue, which was also hot. Keep this one coming.

Author's Response: thank you. Yeah I had a picture in my head of Logan on a coach with this expression on his face.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-24-07 - 01:39 pm Title: Once

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

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