Can't log in - not sure why but here's what I think - I can’t help saying this, you know I can’t, but you really, really need a beta! The chapter’s barely more than two pages – so, so easy to beta! That aside for a fairly short chapter it was quite complicated but finally the real Ro’s in sight! I don’t know much about the Sentry except they made him all powerful but I would’ve enjoyed watching or rather reading about the fight they had. It was so sudden and unexpected throwing his body out like that. I think your description of what/why/how was fine, certainly understandable for laymen but to have seen it – read about it happening – might’ve had more of a kick. Nevertheless I found this whole tiny chapter very intriguing, the where’s and why’s enlightening. The touches of RoLo even when they weren’t together were perfect. The last part made me sigh. Finally! But really, if you need me to beta for you again just let me know, as I said before barely two pages is a piece of cake!

Now will read the next chaper & review in a day or so!