Date: 02-29-08 - 11:06 am Title: Death's end
Jack's dead? Damn. Totally didn't see that one coming.
I'm curious to see how this plays out. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad I can keep you on your toes...
Date: 02-27-08 - 05:29 pm Title: Death's end
I love this. Logan and Chance are both a riot. Jagermeister...man, talk about hangover time. And I like Emma in this. Smug and sly as ever, but she has some great lines. Now, if Hudlin would write T'Challa like you do, then maybe I could tolerate that comic, but alas...
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll see what I can do about Hudlin lol :P
Date: 12-23-07 - 07:36 pm Title: A Chance reunion
Oh yeah, totally to my liking! *grins widely* Loved the last scene. RoLo! Whooohoooo! :D *is happy*
Author's Response: yeah i think everyone did :P
Date: 12-23-07 - 06:31 pm Title: A Chance reunion
"I'm glad we straightened that out." Man, I love that. I hope you have time soon to give us more of this story.
Author's Response: i'll try
Date: 12-23-07 - 06:42 am Title: A Chance reunion
Beautiful, classic RoLo moment the ending here. I just loved it! I'm really fascinated by Chance, what and who he really is, and looking forward to Logan's reaction when he discover's Chance is his son.
Author's Response: he already knows hehe what he does w/ that knowledge......
Date: 10-26-07 - 10:51 am Title: Once
Ahhhh! She left? No!!! Damn.
Loved this chapter! Soooo good. The banter, the love scene, everything. Mmmmhhhh, RoLo makes me happy. :D
But damn. LOL
Author's Response: only write what I know steph
Date: 10-25-07 - 10:18 pm Title: Once
she WHAT?!?!? No, no, no!! You wretch! Bring her back! Damn you. **pouts** Other than my immediate and vehement displeasure at the end of this chapter, I loved it. I was grinning with the banter, enjoying the love making and hoping the chapter wouldn't end anytime soon. **claps** :D Bravo!
Author's Response: well it was a flashback.......something to put in to explain a few things. And set the mood for the next chapter
Date: 10-24-07 - 03:07 pm Title: Once
Oh. My. Goodness.
Best line ever from a RoLo story:
"Storm, are you telling me you're here for a booty call?"
That had me rolling on the floor. That, and her response was classic. Priceless.
The love scene was hot without being sordid. I like the language in it, which gave detailed, pleasant images and left room for the dialogue, which was also hot. Keep this one coming.
Author's Response: thank you. Yeah I had a picture in my head of Logan on a coach with this expression on his face.
Date: 10-24-07 - 01:39 pm Title: Once
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
Date: 10-21-07 - 06:52 am Title: Twilight Zone
Gads, thanks for all the information about what has been going on. I had no idea. *rolls eyes* The Twilight Zone. Truer words... :D
Poor Chance. His Mom and Dad aren't even close to being together, with Ro married to... that dude, ugh. He will fix that, right? Ugh. Gah, I don't like Ro with Panther. Not at all.
But since she came back to the mansion to check on Logan gives me hope, heh. ;)
Chance needs to be careful when talking to Ro and Logan. He might just accidentally call them Mom and Dad. LOL :)
Author's Response: Thank you for looking up a few old stories I wrote as research. This is actually suppose to be a sequel to Space Opera and A Long Road...
Its like tying the two together.
Date: 10-21-07 - 06:49 am Title: the Teacher
Like Chance stated at the end of "Space Opera" he's there to make sure a few things will happen/not happen, right?
I just wonder why. Will we get to know the reasons why he left his own reality?
I love Logan as a teacher, especially when he teaches something that shows him intelligent, full of knowledge and well educated.
Author's Response: I promise you Steph there will be a few twists in the plot. My main thing through any of my stories is consistency. I'm glad you like the chapters. And thank you my beta Darlin.
Date: 10-13-07 - 11:29 pm Title: Twilight Zone
It looks interesting, but the formatting made it a bit difficult to follow.
Date: 10-13-07 - 11:07 am Title: Twilight Zone
Somehow the e-mail transaction didn’t work. You’ll need to double space for the bottom part. This was a good chapter, explaining a bit about Chance. I loved the twilight zone comment, how true – lol.
Date: 10-12-07 - 02:14 pm Title: Twilight Zone
I'm sitting here giggling. Goodness, how true, how true!! I needed the comic relief. And the rundown of all that stuff, since I haven't been reading Uncanny for a few months now. Thanks!
Date: 10-05-07 - 07:05 am Title: the Teacher
I love the description of Storm's calm voice sounding like a song upon the wind - lovely! I’m intrigued that the name of this story is called “Chance” and his last name is Howlett. Very interested in seeing where this is going. Now I love your unique take on RoLo but a beta must be found post haste. If you like I can easily go over your short chapters while at work. I always like getting advance views of your stories. It's interesting that men tend to be my favorite fan fiction writers, guess it's the unique spin you guys have with RoLo.