Pls update this story. It's such a interesting RoLo story.

Wow, that is realy an incredible story! Love me some well-written AU. You manage it perfectly to preserve the core of the characters but building an entirly knew universe around them.

After discovering this story I was so hooked that I read it in one run one afternoon.

It's great that you do not only tell the story from your portagonists view but also give attention to the bad guy and the emotional world of the secondary characters. That adds many layers to the story.

I hope that you will one day finish this story :) Until then I'll patiently (okay, maybe not so patiently, that was a lie) wait...

Author's Response: I wish I knew when I would finish it, too, kiddo, but I'm working on it. Slowly. Thanks for the kind feedback. I'm glad when someone likes my stories enough to watch for updates. My life is a hectic hot mess at times, so I don't always get the chance to sit down alone and write. Thanks for visiting.

Please come back and finish this story

Author's Response: Still working on it. It's been hard getting myself focused and all of the ideas in my head together, to go in one direction.

This is crazy. I can't stand horror, I really can't; scary movies keep me up for weeks and horror stories always unnerve the heck out of me

but I can't stop reading this, whyyy. It's addicting. It is. I really love Logan and Ororo's dynamic in this. You always capture them really well, but as with the rest of your spectacular AU's, they have a unique voice in this one. Also, I really want to gut Pietro like a fish now. I really, really do. And all the narratives of whoever Ororo's predator is give me chills. (I'm holding out for the hope that it isn't Logan's new dark side, even if I can tell I'm wrong...)

Why does your work always get to me like this? You're too talented!

I'm slightly wary of continuing on, because as I said, horror and I aren't the best of friends, but the RoLo in this is proving to be my undoing. One of my favorite incarnations of them that you've done, yet. :)

Author's Response: See, I don't read horror that often, either. Not my favorite genre, and I don't like the resulting nightmares when someone writes it too darn well. I knew people would eventually hate Pietro. I don't know why I like writing him like a royal d***head, but I just do. You might have read farther than chapter nine since the last time I posted an update, so you might know by now who Ororo's stalker is. heeheehee... Thanks for the nice feedback, Marbles. I enjoy talking with you.

I continue to be intrigued by this, was disappointed there's not another chapter but will wait patiently for the next.

Author's Response: might have to be really patient, my writer's block is messing with me and I'm in the middle of a painting. plus, I have a stable of sketch ideas all champing at the bit to come out. we shall see!!

I really liked how she went to Forge in this capacity and who uses bums rush anymore so loved that although I kind of expected a talk, some mention of what was going on with him as it's so not normal but she seems to have accepted it with no problems.

You know just when I thought this could be tied up nicely, he saved her, they’re in love, she doesn’t care about his mutation, they're the proud parents of Giblet and can live happily ever after sans Pietro you had the police looking into the case more thoroughly. Nice.

Author's Response: Ororo's been through so much, what with the stalker, being mugged and beaten, and actually seeing Logan transform, right before he saved her life - again - that the whole "by the way, honey, I'm a werewolf" thing lost its ability to terrify her. Shock, sure, but she's getting used to the idea. And I giggled when I read "they're the proud parents of Giblet". Classic. I'm always so tempted to steal some of your lines, D.

Aren’t Pietro and Lorna related? Or is that just a sometimes they aren’t sometimes they are comic book thing when they retcon? But then I guess you’re going with the idea that none of them are related, not even Magnus and Pietro, eh? I’m liking the easy pace you’ve set for RoLo but chomping at the bit for answers about the obsessed fan.

Author's Response: I am keeping them unrelated. I threw Wanda in there, too, if you haven't seen her yet, along with her magically conjured twin boys. Magnus was in there to show the kind of businessman that Pietro would aspire to be, if he had kept moving up in his company.

Whoa. I'm really, really liking this, Cee. And Pietro! Yum. I love that guy and ever since AoA always thought he and Ororo were good together so it's fun to have him in this all sexy and stuff. Oh yeah! :D

Author's Response: heh...oops. you might like him progressively less in this as the story goes on. sorry!!!