[Report This]Date: 05-03-11 - 03:48 pm Title: Closer
This is crazy. I can't stand horror, I really can't; scary movies keep me up for weeks and horror stories always unnerve the heck out of me
but I can't stop reading this, whyyy. It's addicting. It is. I really love Logan and Ororo's dynamic in this. You always capture them really well, but as with the rest of your spectacular AU's, they have a unique voice in this one. Also, I really want to gut Pietro like a fish now. I really, really do. And all the narratives of whoever Ororo's predator is give me chills. (I'm holding out for the hope that it isn't Logan's new dark side, even if I can tell I'm wrong...)
Why does your work always get to me like this? You're too talented!
I'm slightly wary of continuing on, because as I said, horror and I aren't the best of friends, but the RoLo in this is proving to be my undoing. One of my favorite incarnations of them that you've done, yet. :)
Author's Response: See, I don't read horror that often, either. Not my favorite genre, and I don't like the resulting nightmares when someone writes it too darn well.
I knew people would eventually hate Pietro. I don't know why I like writing him like a royal d***head, but I just do. You might have read farther than chapter nine since the last time I posted an update, so you might know by now who Ororo's stalker is. heeheehee...
Thanks for the nice feedback, Marbles. I enjoy talking with you.
[Report This]Date: 12-23-07 - 06:54 pm Title: Closer
Ewwww! He's watching her every step! *shudders* And now that "oh so nice" card. He's about to do something more drastic, right? Creepy.
Wheee, Logan's about to come over! YAY! :D
After that ugly revelation his ex hit him over the head with he most likely can use some good company.
I love that Ro asked him over, but I totally understands Ali's protectiveness over Ro. She's pretty much inviting a complete stranger to protect her, heh.
Author's Response: Poor Logan won't have to deal with his ex anymore, but more to come with that. Ali is in 'Ro's corner, if she doesn't have a heart attack.
[Report This]Date: 12-08-07 - 10:12 pm Title: Closer
SEXY ending...ain't nothing like a hot sexy man taking control and being all manly and protective. Great Chapter!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, Logan is pretty manly, isn't he? I'm bad about writing Logan in this little "sensitive guy" mold and making him too much of a teddy bear from story to story. I wanted him to be fierce in this. Thanks for the review, Naomi.
[Report This]Date: 12-08-07 - 12:05 am Title: Closer
Creeeeeepy! Yeesh! Classic stalker language. "I need you...you can't live without me." Yikes! I wonder what Obsesso boy will think of Logan showing up. I love Logan but I can totally understand Ali's suspicions. Good chapter.
Author's Response: Obsesso Boy...great name for an original character! Just kidding. Yeah, I want Ororo and Logan together, but in real life, that wouldn't happen. It's in the back of my mind that if Ororo felt strongly enough about him, she might toss reason aside to give him a chance, despite the risk.
[Report This]Date: 12-07-07 - 08:31 pm Title: Closer
eeeek! i LOVE this! i'm not usually a fan of the vamp/werewolf/fantasy fics but this one is rocking my socks off.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this! More to come sooner or later.
[Report This]Date: 12-07-07 - 01:27 am Title: Closer
Cee!!!! Why'd you have to stop!! I know, I know, you're working, but Cee... *pouts*
Who is this creepy stalker? Is it Vic? Forge? I'm not even going to start with Carol.
I love that Logan admitted to himself that he has a crush on 'Ro and I'm so glad she called him and he's coming to watch out for her... He's like a guard dog... only a werewolf. Yeah I know that was a horrible joke, but I'm sick so that was the best I could come up with
Author's Response: there is more. I have a partial chapter on my desktop. Hope you feel better, Tiger. And it ain't Forge; he's her ex, and it would be kinda logical for it to just be someone from her past, but he might play a smaller role in a future chapter. Vic? Eh. Even I'm not sure who it is yet.
[Report This]Date: 12-06-07 - 04:30 am Title: Closer
Creepy, Creepy, Creepy!
I have so many questions and theories!!
I love the complexity of this story! I spend a lot of time watching that stupid scroll bar over there --->
I never want the chapters to end!! Can you tell that I'm really enjoying this story? Two very enthusiastic thumbs up!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying this, Shan. Keep the theories coming. I enjoy hearing what people think, both of what they think of the story, or even where it should go next.
[Report This]Date: 12-05-07 - 09:56 pm Title: Closer
Logans ex wife is a BITCH what a slut. Whats wrong with Logan? I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: Yeah, Carol is a piece of work. Originally I planned to make her a little more likable, but I wanted Logan's anger with her to be more noticeable and meaningful, and for him to have a reason to let his new aggression to show. He's not finished being angry! Thanks for reading.
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