[Report This]Date: 01-18-08 - 06:41 am Title: I Trust You
Ray Darkholme, multiple personalities... loved it!
*snorts* Loved it when Ro was about to get the measuring tape. LOL :D What a great pissing contest! :D But gads, Pietro! I was like "what the hell?" when he showed up and let us peek into his mind to see what he was up to. Ugh. I'm so glad Logan and Ro shoved him out of the door. But did he get the hint? LOL I doubt it.
Author's Response: It's funny. Initially I made that stalker a male before I realized it would have been a better twist to make her a female, and I was planning on using Callisto. In the old Uncanny books, she was just this plain, scraggly looking, wasted thing, and she was jealous of Ororo. But the multiple personalities made sense when I plugged in Raven instead. I loved the visual I had of Ororo watching both men face off, so that made it into this chapter. Glad you liked it, Steph, and thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 01-13-08 - 01:30 am Title: I Trust You
Finally caught up and sooooooooooooooooo worth the headache I am sure to have from my face being pressed to my monitor. :D This last romp was so smokin' hot! OMG! I have no words, this is one of your better fics! **kisses** Loves!!
Author's Response: From the woman who usually steams up my monitor with the scenes you write, Hobbins, that is high praise indeed. I wanted 'Ro to be aggressive this time around, since she's spent a lot of time in this fic huddling under tables and in closets, being knocked down, etc. Poor woman!!! She deserved some lovin'. Glad you could read this week. Miss you. Talk soon!
[Report This]Date: 01-13-08 - 12:24 am Title: I Trust You
Oh my...that was not who I was expecting to be the stalker. My mouth was literally hanging open. That whole scene was intense and what a way to die. I mean...damn!
Just when I was thinking that Logan and Ro could finally relax now that the stalker was dead, here comes creepy ass Pietro.
I'm surprised Logan didn't beat his ass when he kissed Ro. Even if it wasn't on the lips, its the principle of the thing.
Loving this.
Author's Response: Aside from Abandon, I think this is the bloodiest story I've written. I don't know why! Everyone generally asked me if Vic was the stalker, and that would have been fine, but I think of Vic as a more open, aggressive character who wouldn't resort to hiding for too long. Skulking, sure, but not being as mysterious. Pietro's creepy ass will keep coming around. And he will eventually get his ass kicked! Woo hoo! Glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 01-12-08 - 11:38 pm Title: I Trust You
I so dig this story. Love their heat and his possessiveness. Pietro is a dead man walking. :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you, Naomi! Pietro...what can we say about Pietro? Yeah, he's pretty much dead. That's about it.
[Report This]Date: 01-11-08 - 11:11 pm Title: I Trust You
and right when i thought i could take a breath...here comes Pietro. What an arrogant douchebag!
Author's Response: Isn't he, though? :-) The stalker was a filler, still part of the plot, but there mostly to bring those two closer together. More trouble around the corner, shan!!
[Report This]Date: 01-11-08 - 11:06 pm Title: I Trust You
alright, I'm confused.... Who's the stalker? I mean that character... is he another one of Raven's kids?
It would be interesting if Pietro just happened to be out alone for a walk.... in the woods.... during a full moon...
Author's Response: The stalker is random and anonymous. Now, what's funny is, originally I was gonna make the stalker Callisto!! An obsessed fan can be male or female, and in comicsverse, she hated Ororo but was obsessed with her. But by the time it hit me that she could be it, I had already established that character as a male. So, I basically made Raven Darkholme "Ray" and made him a schizophrenic with multiple personality disorder. Again, someone who doesn't like Ororo too much in the books and who would enjoy taunting her. Pietro under a full moon...could happen. Heh.
[Report This]Date: 01-11-08 - 09:57 pm Title: I Trust You
Good Chapter.
Pietro is either one brave fool or crazy as hell!
Though I think it's obvious which one he is : )
Author's Response: He's a little of both! Thank you for the nice review.
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