[Report This]Date: 05-15-09 - 10:48 pm Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
I really liked how she went to Forge in this capacity and who uses bums rush anymore so loved that although I kind of expected a talk, some mention of what was going on with him as it's so not normal but she seems to have accepted it with no problems.
You know just when I thought this could be tied up nicely, he saved her, they’re in love, she doesn’t care about his mutation, they're the proud parents of Giblet and can live happily ever after sans Pietro you had the police looking into the case more thoroughly. Nice.
Author's Response: Ororo's been through so much, what with the stalker, being mugged and beaten, and actually seeing Logan transform, right before he saved her life - again - that the whole "by the way, honey, I'm a werewolf" thing lost its ability to terrify her. Shock, sure, but she's getting used to the idea. And I giggled when I read "they're the proud parents of Giblet". Classic. I'm always so tempted to steal some of your lines, D.
[Report This]Date: 03-06-08 - 08:06 am Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
I went to Barnes and Noble and bought 2 books the other day and haven't finished either one. While they're entertaining and well-written, they fail to grab my attention and make me want more.
This story, this chapter and Logan's dream sequence was truly spellbinding. That piece was perfectly desciptive. I could perfectly see two wolves circling, the wounded bird and snow on the ground, then finally Logan's horror when seeing what he'd done to Ororo.
I totally, absolutely loved this chapter.
Author's Response: I'm smiling fit to bust with this review. Thank you for the praise and vote of confidence. Hey, at least you've been to Barnes and Noble! I went about three weeks ago and walked out emptyhanded! *sniffle* I'm glad you liked the scene with the wolves. Ever since I started taking the medicine I'm on, I seldom sleep deeply enough to dream, anymore. I miss them. When I write a dream sequence, I think I'm putting the dreams my brain wishes it could have to paper. Good to hear from you!
[Report This]Date: 03-06-08 - 06:58 am Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
Love your story, please update soon. ;)
Author's Response: I'll try! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 03-01-08 - 08:20 am Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
watch your step! i'm in the middle of gushing over this chapter! once again, you have delivered. just when i thought it was okay to breath *bam!* the plot thickens.
i've been meaning to ask, do you have any originals that you share online? i'd love to read them if you do. and if you don't...then you should really consider it. :-D
Author's Response: I don't have any original fiction, alas...not that I don't want to. Back when I was in high school, I said "I want to write the great American contemporary romance novel!" Here I am, almost two decades later, and fanfic is the closest I have ever come. One of these days, I will have a character who speaks with my voice, but til then, I'm just borrowing Claremont's for the occasional romp. I'm so glad you liked this, Shan.
[Report This]Date: 03-01-08 - 02:13 am Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
Pietro knows him now, Forge is doing a personality assessment and 'Ro is trying to save him ....what's a boy to do?
Man I hope 'Ro can convince him to stay with her.
Good chapter.
Author's Response: He'd have a hard time staying away from her, just because he already loves her so much, and they have a connection stronger than blood...and blood is the giveaway bonus in regard to guessing the next plot twist. Thanks for visiting, Burnz!
[Report This]Date: 02-29-08 - 11:13 am Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
“I’m in love with a werewolf!” LOL Loved that one! :D Forge putting everything together to kill Logan, when all 'Ro wanted was something to help him.. well, for some reason I found that funny, heh. :)
Aww, what a horrible dream. I'm glad Ororo was there for him when he finally woke up.
“Logan, I was afraid FOR you.” *loves*
Damn, the police reopened the case... that can't be good.
Author's Response: Yeah, Forge knowing how to kill Logan IS kinda funny! But that line in that scene grabbed me when it came to me, and I had to run with it. The case almost felt like overkill, but I thought "okay, a hospital ER treats a guy who got mauled by a wolf in the middle of a Massachusetts coastal town, and no one blinks?" It had to come back eventually. Thanks for reading, Steph, and for the great review!
[Report This]Date: 02-28-08 - 04:02 pm Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
Oh wow, CeeCee. Another amazing chapter you've written. Intense dream, intense crying scene, and Oh MY what's up with the detectives? I'm excited about the next chapter and I can't wait, wait, wait until you've written it.
Kisses sweets,
Rolletti
Author's Response: Rolletti! Yay! Now it's a party! How have you been? Yeah, those detectives...might throw a monkey wrench into Ororo and Logan's lives again. I don't know why, but I like writing dream sequences. I have a few of 'em in a few of my stories. I think I used to dream vividly as a kid. Logan seldom strikes you as the crying type, granted, so when he occasionally sheds a few tears, I think it has to be over something really, REALLY overwhelming. Dreaming of killing the woman he loves and feeling like he's hurtling out of control would do that, I think. Thanks for visiting. Glad you're enjoying this.
[Report This]Date: 02-27-08 - 03:17 am Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
Oh my god!! I just thought about it! Pietro is the one who bit Logan isn't he? And the only way to reverse lycanthropy is to kill the one who created the new one! How did i not see this!
Author's Response: Now see here, don't give me an idea for my plot that's better than the one I had in mind!! I only WISH I had come up with the one you just suggested, but alas...no. Mind you, there WILL be some biting going on, and Pietro is about to get a serious butt whuppin'...but I won't give too much away. But still...Nik, that just ain't fair!!! It WOULD have been cool if Pietro had bitten Logan, doggone it!
[Report This]Date: 02-26-08 - 08:14 pm Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
I did actually like the scene between Ororo and Forge. Is he going to find something to help? Or will 'Ro end up a werewolf too?
Logan's dream was interesting. I'm guessing that silver wolf was Pietro.... something bad is going to happen with that isn't it?
Author's Response: Bad things happen wherever Pietro appears. Pietro was our silver wolf, indeed. As for 'Ro...hmmmmmmmmmmm...
[Report This]Date: 02-26-08 - 05:03 pm Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy I'm writing, too, and that you took a sec to read me and leave the nice review! Good hearing from you, Quana.
[Report This]Date: 02-26-08 - 02:33 am Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
I am so riveted to this story it's ridiculous, lol. I'm loving the imagery you create. Can't wait for more :-).
Author's Response: I'm so flattered, thank you! And where have you been? It's been months since I've seen your user handle or any updates to your stories! I miss them! And you!
[Report This]Date: 02-26-08 - 12:24 am Title: I Hear the Secrets That You Keep
Oh my God! That was pretty intense, dude! SO instead of being like everyone else and saying update this story, I'll settle for you updating some of your other stories....!!! Please!
Author's Response: hee hee hee... I'm getting to it, I promise, Nik. More or less...*looks sheepish and guilty for her own laziness* Glad you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: hee hee hee... I'm getting to it, I promise, Nik. More or less...*looks sheepish and guilty for her own laziness* Glad you enjoyed it.
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