[Report This]Date: 05-31-09 - 06:25 pm Title: Awake
Mrs. Bova! Oh, that made me laugh. It's taken me a while to get back to this but I'm so glad I did. An interesting turn of event, Logan's biting everyone. Wondering what he's going to do when he has a whole clan. ;D
Author's Response: ha! I know. he's the leader of the pack. okay, I'll stop, bad pun...
I love minor characters from old comics. I always feel sorry for Wanda and Pietro when I think of how the only nurturing motherly influence they ever had was from a genetically altered cow.
[Report This]Date: 07-27-08 - 06:17 pm Title: Awake
I'm loving this story : ) Great update Cee
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07-27-08 - 05:31 pm Title: Awake
I swear I reviewed this... oh well, here's me trying again lol
So it seems like Pietro is getting closer to his first change and I really don't think that's a good thing. Maybe he'll just get burned to death by some form of silver in his place. Just wishful thinking...
Is Ororo a werewolf now? Logan did bite her so she should be... unless he wasn't wolfed out enough for that to happen... does that even matter? If she is a werewolf is she going to have white fur? That would kinda stick out in the woods. Or she might get mistaken for an escaped polar bear if there's a zoo near by...
anyway can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: escaped polar bear... *heeheehee*
Pietro is enjoying the first signs of his new blessing/affliction. He might react differently than Logan initially did. As for Ororo...dum-de-dum-dum-DUNH!!! I ain't tellin'...
[Report This]Date: 07-26-08 - 08:26 am Title: Awake
This is a really well crafted story. I'm constantly asking; why, what and how. The suspense is neither forced or too drawn out. It is so refreshing to be frustrated (in a good way) in ff land as the obvious and predictable doesn't satisfy! You keep us guessing.
You've created a AU which uses enough familiar references so as not to lose the reader but then you offer a completely new spins and dimensions. You strike the right balance in refering to commonly held werewolf lore and your take on what Logan is going through as internal dialogue.
I took my hat off to the introduction and good use of Forge.
I loved the gradual reveal in chapter 17 when the characteristics, physical and sensory, of Logan are reminiscent of 'Wolverine'. The dialogue and scene setting is well timed.
Please update soon
Author's Response: This was a wonderful review that makes me want to jump even higher, because you've raised the bar!!! What great feedback. I'm not super familiar with werewolf lore, so I wanted to bring different ideas to the table. Logan's internal dialogue feeds a lot of my stories, not just this one, so you'll see more of that in this. I'm glad you liked Forge! He will pop up again soon, briefly. I will update this when I can. I have another chapter of another fic tangling me up right now. Thank you so much.
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