Wow, that is realy an incredible story! Love me some well-written AU. You manage it perfectly to preserve the core of the characters but building an entirly knew universe around them.

After discovering this story I was so hooked that I read it in one run one afternoon.

It's great that you do not only tell the story from your portagonists view but also give attention to the bad guy and the emotional world of the secondary characters. That adds many layers to the story.

I hope that you will one day finish this story :) Until then I'll patiently (okay, maybe not so patiently, that was a lie) wait...

Author's Response: I wish I knew when I would finish it, too, kiddo, but I'm working on it. Slowly. Thanks for the kind feedback. I'm glad when someone likes my stories enough to watch for updates. My life is a hectic hot mess at times, so I don't always get the chance to sit down alone and write. Thanks for visiting.