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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-18-08 - 06:34 am Title: Thrall

Wow. *blinks*
The scene in the kitchen when Ro realized it was Logan standing in front of her was awesome!
Pietro and Lorna... shit. Could someone please rip off his balls? He's in serious need of some pain.
Damn that crazed stalker. Damn this cliffhanger! GAH! More, Cee! Please! :D

Author's Response: I loved writing Ororo's remark of "Holy shit." It just tickled me. Pietro's balls are definitely in danger!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-18-08 - 06:31 am Title: The Better to See You With, Part Two

*drools* Loving me some hot - undisturbed - RoLo. :D
And now he's changing... Will Ro see him like this? OOhhhh, I can't wait! *runs off to next chapter*

Author's Response: Yeah, I do that "interrupted" thing a lot...I need to stop that! Yup, I planned originally to have him have a close call with how he looked, like he'd go out hunting, she'd wake up to an empty bed, he'd come back, make love to her again, and she'd wake up to find feathers or fur at the front door, etc. But I wanted her to know who he was. That was something that pushed me to write it.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-13-08 - 01:30 am Title: I Trust You

Finally caught up and sooooooooooooooooo worth the headache I am sure to have from my face being pressed to my monitor. :D This last romp was so smokin' hot! OMG! I have no words, this is one of your better fics! **kisses** Loves!!

Author's Response: From the woman who usually steams up my monitor with the scenes you write, Hobbins, that is high praise indeed. I wanted 'Ro to be aggressive this time around, since she's spent a lot of time in this fic huddling under tables and in closets, being knocked down, etc. Poor woman!!! She deserved some lovin'. Glad you could read this week. Miss you. Talk soon!

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-13-08 - 12:24 am Title: I Trust You

Oh my...that was not who I was expecting to be the stalker. My mouth was literally hanging open. That whole scene was intense and what a way to die. I mean...damn!

Just when I was thinking that Logan and Ro could finally relax now that the stalker was dead, here comes creepy ass Pietro.

I'm surprised Logan didn't beat his ass when he kissed Ro. Even if it wasn't on the lips, its the principle of the thing.

Loving this.

Author's Response: Aside from Abandon, I think this is the bloodiest story I've written. I don't know why! Everyone generally asked me if Vic was the stalker, and that would have been fine, but I think of Vic as a more open, aggressive character who wouldn't resort to hiding for too long. Skulking, sure, but not being as mysterious. Pietro's creepy ass will keep coming around. And he will eventually get his ass kicked! Woo hoo! Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-12-08 - 11:38 pm Title: I Trust You

I so dig this story. Love their heat and his possessiveness. Pietro is a dead man walking. :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you, Naomi! Pietro...what can we say about Pietro? Yeah, he's pretty much dead. That's about it.

Reviewer: shan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-11-08 - 11:11 pm Title: I Trust You

and right when i thought i could take a breath...here comes Pietro. What an arrogant douchebag!

Author's Response: Isn't he, though? :-) The stalker was a filler, still part of the plot, but there mostly to bring those two closer together. More trouble around the corner, shan!!

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-11-08 - 11:06 pm Title: I Trust You

alright, I'm confused.... Who's the stalker? I mean that character... is he another one of Raven's kids?

It would be interesting if Pietro just happened to be out alone for a walk.... in the woods.... during a full moon...

Author's Response: The stalker is random and anonymous. Now, what's funny is, originally I was gonna make the stalker Callisto!! An obsessed fan can be male or female, and in comicsverse, she hated Ororo but was obsessed with her. But by the time it hit me that she could be it, I had already established that character as a male. So, I basically made Raven Darkholme "Ray" and made him a schizophrenic with multiple personality disorder. Again, someone who doesn't like Ororo too much in the books and who would enjoy taunting her. Pietro under a full moon...could happen. Heh.

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-11-08 - 09:57 pm Title: I Trust You

Good Chapter.
Pietro is either one brave fool or crazy as hell!
Though I think it's obvious which one he is : )




Author's Response: He's a little of both! Thank you for the nice review.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-10-08 - 12:03 am Title: Thrall

Okay, i REALLY forgive you for not updating "Abandon" now, because this is a VERY good story. I may have to add it to my favs.

great job.

Author's Response: I have Abandon on the brain. It's that Logan/Creed fight scene where I am drawing a blank. Thanks for reading me, Rhaps. *hugs*

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-08 - 04:12 am Title: The Better to See You With, Part Two

OH MY GOSH!!!!!!! I couldn't catch my breath after reading this. My eyeballs are still steaming. whoooo honey, you have some imagination and amazing writing skills. I'm so jealouse. WOW!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Rolletti (squealing with delight)

Author's Response: Steaming eyeballs. Best compliment ever, girl! Thank you! And hey, I've been a housewife and worked in insurance for eight years. That will give a woman a desperate imagination!!!! And don't be jealous, either. You have a way with words, lady.

Reviewer: Onyx Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-08 - 02:03 am Title: Thrall

What 'Tro did was so evil!!! I hope werewolf Logan takes a chunk out of his a$$ LOL!
Poor Lorna. Poor 'Ro. Poor... well, poor everybody.
Great chapter loved it.

Author's Response: Pietro won't walk away with much of his ass. Originally he was just gonna be slightly slimy, but I decided he needs to be evil. There will be much more of werewolf Logan, more than anyone bargained for. Thank you for the review, Onyx!

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-08 - 01:51 am Title: Thrall

CEE!!!! OMG! WHY CEE??? EVIL, EVIL, EVIL!!!! I had so many things to say about these last two chapters but OMG!! Wait.... he's a werewolf right? You need silver bullets to kill a werewolf... or a car. So Logan should be okay, right?? But what about 'Ro??? I'm so glad he managed to tell her that it was him but geez Cee! Evil!!!

Author's Response: He's definitely a werewolf. And you know me, I AM evil!!! He has an allergy to silver in this so far that just popped up after he got bitten by that wolf. So yes, that will play a part. Logan will manage, not to worry. And 'Ro loves him. She'll get used to vacuuming more when he sheds on the carpet...hee hee hee.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-08 - 12:02 am Title: Thrall

Loved it I HATE cliffhangers. I can't wait to read more so update soon.


Author's Response: Sorry! I have to have my usual dose of those when I write an adventure story. The next one will be cliffhanger free...mostly. I think... Thanks for reading and reviewing, kiddo!

Reviewer: darkhorse2763@yahoo.com Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-08-08 - 06:00 pm Title: Thrall

oh, that was a naughty, naughty cliffhanger. but, as always, awesome chapter. most eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you tuned in and enjoyed it, thank you for visiting and leaving a review! And you know me, I write naughty pretty frequently!!

Reviewer: rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-31-07 - 05:11 am Title: The Better to See You With

Of course I got to the end and screamed. You are such a tease. MORE, MORE, MORE!
This is such a great story, I just can't wait to see what happens next.

Rolletti

Author's Response: More to come! Teases, screams, and more of my usual abusive use of metaphors and cliffhangers. I promise!!!

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