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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-30-07 - 11:03 am Title: The Better to See You With

Heehee, Pietro. *sticks out tongue*
Argh, Ali! Why did you tell him where Ro went off to. She surely wasn't in her right mind, and I blame Remy for that, heh.
Loved how they were fighting over her laptop; that was cute. I totally was on Ro's side here, heh. Her reaction was absolutely understandable. I hate people reading over my shoulder or watching me draw even. *shudders*
“Be glad Thumper and Flower ain’t swimmin’ in the sauce with him.” Bwahahahaha! *snorts*
The last paragraph sounded way too peaceful to me, gave me a feeling of foreboding. Something's about to happen, right? Or is it just me being paranoid? LOL ;D

Author's Response: I had fun writing those two scenes with the laptop and the stew. Ororo is a city slicker and a workaholic. Foreboding? Who, me??? Now would I use evil foreshadowing? ...*yes*

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-29-07 - 03:07 pm Title: The Better to See You With

Well aren't they getting along nicely in the cabin in the woods? Lorna an Pietro canned like tuna...nice. I guess Ali being distracted is what lead her to be so generous with info instead of just saying her buddy was out of town. Good thing she didn't have the address! I look forward to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: getting along nicely...whoa, nelly, aren't they?? I almost sent Pietro into the woods, since that would've left him more vulnerable if he and Logan got into it, since Logan knows the lay of the land. But I wanted 'Tro to see Logan comfortable with 'Ro instead, in her own setting, where he could see that she trusted Logan enough to basically let him live with her, and pretty soon after they met!!! More soon, Burnz!

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-29-07 - 02:13 pm Title: The Better to See You With

hmm... a taurus huh? I loved all the RoLo moments in this Cee! So sweet!

and Pietro is going to start causing trouble isn't he? Is he the stalker? I glad he was fired!

Author's Response: yeah, a Taurus! A nice, stubborn sign. My husband is one, too. Pietro has trouble written all over him. And the stalker is just on the periphery causing trouble. He isn't the real villain.... ;-)

Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-28-07 - 05:28 pm Title: The Better to See You With

Love it! Can't wait to read more! ::hint hint:: :D

Author's Response: heh. Oh, there will be more! muahahaha... Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: shan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-28-07 - 05:19 am Title: The Better to See You With

and another awesome chapter! i'm really enjoying the way you are developing their relationship. and take that! Pietro!

Author's Response: Yeah, Pietro, take that!!! I'm glad you enjoyed that.

Reviewer: darkhorse2763 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-07 - 10:33 pm Title: The Better to See You With

an outstanding chapter, as usual. i was REALLY hoping you'd choose to update this one after the holidays, as it's definitely one of my favorites (though i AM hankering for a new chapter of 'abandon' and your new chick-lit one). so excited to see the chemistry between 'ro and logan building, and also excited to see the unfolding of the plot with pietro. above all, though, you've got SUCH a way with words. your prose is always so tightly written, and your phrasing always sends a shiver down my spine. out of everything, this one line jumped out at me: "His eyes were narrow and a flinty gray that only hosted warmth when he laughed." don't ask why, but definitely one of my favorite lines. anyway, with that said, can't wait for the next update!


Author's Response: Wow! I'm flattered when I get feedback not only on the chapter, but on certain lines that grab people. Thanks for reviewing this, it made my day, and it makes me want to update this pretty soon as time allows! Abandon is in the queue, it's been on my mind. And the chick lit one is still on my plate, too! I have fun writing that one.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-07 - 10:15 pm Title: The Better to See You With

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.


Author's Response: Thanks, Dragon! I'll get to it...eventually!

Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-25-07 - 05:15 am Title: I’ll Be There

Dang Cee... Where's the rest??? I need more!!

Author's Response: I'm trying, I'm trying!!! I'll get to it, I promise.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-23-07 - 06:59 pm Title: I’ll Be There

“Expect me to call later tonight. Maybe more than once.” *snorts* Love Ali! :D I'm glad she and Remy got their act together. Kept her from calling for a while, too. ;)
Yay, they're going on vacation together. Me likey! :D I wouldn't have liked the idea of Ro all alone. Not now! *shudders* So I'm more than glad she invited Logan to come with her.
I wonder what the stalker guy thought about Logan at Ro's house. He's gonna follow them to the cabin, right? If he does, please don't let him interrupt some hot RoLo action. LOL :D
Gads, Pietro. He really thinks Ro's got the hots for him. Pfft. *rolls eyes* Men. ;)

Author's Response: Stalker guy's around the corner, waiting to settle everyone's hash. Pietro is about to get his hash settled, too.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-23-07 - 06:54 pm Title: Closer

Ewwww! He's watching her every step! *shudders* And now that "oh so nice" card. He's about to do something more drastic, right? Creepy.
Wheee, Logan's about to come over! YAY! :D
After that ugly revelation his ex hit him over the head with he most likely can use some good company.
I love that Ro asked him over, but I totally understands Ali's protectiveness over Ro. She's pretty much inviting a complete stranger to protect her, heh.

Author's Response: Poor Logan won't have to deal with his ex anymore, but more to come with that. Ali is in 'Ro's corner, if she doesn't have a heart attack.

Reviewer: athena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-19-07 - 07:22 pm Title: I’ll Be There

I love this story. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what is going to happend on their Vacation.

Author's Response: I'm still trying to figure that out, but I can't get a writing minute in edgewise at home this week. Thanks for the nice review, Athena.

Reviewer: shan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-07 - 02:41 am Title: I’ll Be There

another update! Weeeee! *spins around*
and another great chapter! i love it when they get to the snugglies. and omg! i was praying at theend of chapter 9 that Logan wouldn't go over to that woman's house and eat her cat! and that just didn't sound right lol

Author's Response: I considered making her cat a harder sell, since he's lupine, and practically canine, but I inevitably would have had the cat spitting at him and him growling back, which would have given comic relief, but I'm saving that up for a future chapter. I won't divulge why yet!

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-07 - 06:58 pm Title: I’ll Be There

I love this story! I like how Logan stayed to protect her. Okay... I loved that entire scene. Are they together now? They sure were acting like it.

I think her stalker is going to cause some real trouble soon.

Yay for Ali and Remy!

I don't like Pietro. he's an ass.

Author's Response: It's okay not to like Pietro. Ali and Remy was an afterthought, but I liked it when it came to me. Poor woman was gonna have a coronary if someone didn't comfort her! Yeah, that stalker...

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-07 - 04:43 pm Title: I’ll Be There

Well at least Logan got the kitty seal of approval. Hopefully he will get the same from the rest of her friends. Speaking of which it looks like things are going well from the start for Remy and Ali. Although Pietro's stock is going down it seems. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Ali and Remy were an afterthought; Remy was just in the background before and he was already established as being in their circle of friends. I figured it was logical for Ali to hook up with him in the heat of the moment, while he was...er, comforting her when Ororo got stalked. And that way, she doesn't give in and mess with Pietro, since he isn't quite the whole package after all. I won't give any more away. And in the real world, I don't think a guy like Logan would even like cats!!

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-08-07 - 10:12 pm Title: Closer

SEXY ending...ain't nothing like a hot sexy man taking control and being all manly and protective. Great Chapter!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, Logan is pretty manly, isn't he? I'm bad about writing Logan in this little "sensitive guy" mold and making him too much of a teddy bear from story to story. I wanted him to be fierce in this. Thanks for the review, Naomi.

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