Please update! tks

Uhm, i honestly don't think Logan would know the name of Emmas parfume, but aside that, not bad.

Author's Response: I know Logan wouldn't but i wanted to invoke the idea of it being expensive, only the best for Emma ya know!

I like Logan's eyebrow.

Emma always makes any fic with Ororo more fun. They're such polar opposites. Funny how he likes Emma's perfume but not Forge's Old Spice.

You've made Logan very likable in this story.

These two sentences threw me.

Marie took a deep breath, she promised her self that she would not pummel the younger mutant girl. “Your right, Kitty.”

The younger girl looked caught off guard. “Bobby and me have been through worst.” She turned and left the room.

It was hard to tell if it was Rogue saying she and Bobby had been through the worst. You could say "Kitty looked caught off-guard." Makes it clearer, and it doesn't repeat "younger girl," since you already have "younger mutant" in the sentence before it.

Author's Response: At this point i'm to lazy to fix this, but i'm glad you said something. Other's would have just read right over it and never said anything about word choice.