Date: 02-09-08 - 09:01 am Title: Chapter Two
Another gripping chapter Windy. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Date: 02-07-08 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Two
Kill Xavier!?
Really? Chica, you've got me wanting more. I honestly should be doing my articles for newsapaper, but instead i'm in enthralled by your writing.
Date: 02-07-08 - 12:25 am Title: Chapter Two
Da-da-da-dum! I love it! I can't believe I missed this. It is a terrific start. I look forward to finding out the back story of how Storm was separated from them (presumed dead) and watching her new some-what confused relationship with Logan develop. Yippie!
Date: 02-05-08 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter Two
O.o
good stuff. Sorry, that's all i can manage right now.
Date: 02-05-08 - 09:12 pm Title: Chapter Two
Mmmmhhhh, Logan! Totally love that guy. LOL And Ro, awwww, I just wanna hug her. :) So confused and scared. I'm glad Logan got to her in time, giving her some sense of safety and comfort.
I hope someone's gonna destroy that headstone soon before Ro sees it, getting creeped out even more.
Date: 02-05-08 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter Two
What is going on? First Ro escape that horrible place and now she doesn't remember who she is> Update fast. I can't wait to find out if she is going to carry out the plan to kill CHarles Xavier. Windrider1, your writing is superb. The inticate details that you use grab me from the first sentence. Keep up the great work.
Date: 02-05-08 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter Two
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
Date: 02-05-08 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter Two
Wooooooooooooooooooooooot!
Logan rocks my socks. What a big, rough n'tough softie he is! I also love Ororo's delirium. With her new fighting skills, I can't wait to see whose ass she kicks first.
The man’s heart was positively bleeding for the woman on the bed. I love that line. Man, that just brings it all together right there.
Author's Response: **face hurts from grinning** Thank you, Cee! Someone's ass needs a whooping... Don't know for sure who yet. But it'll happen. :)
Date: 02-05-08 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter Two
This chapter was so awesome. You managed to make Ororo's fear seem very real. You also captured the intensity of Logan's feelings so well. Awesome! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!! **blushing** I'll update as soon as I can!