Date: 02-10-08 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter Three
Hmm....The head thingy coming off. Woo! Looks like everyone is seeing that Logan is showing real interest in our recovering weather goddess. I am surprised she didn't try to kill the prof straight away if that was her implanted mission. I wonder what will happen when Henry and Forge come. Good update!
Date: 02-09-08 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter Three
Read all 3 chapters...simply desperate for more, more, more. I love it!!
Date: 02-09-08 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Three
Aww, but he is very sweet, lol.
Its becoming more and more interesting.
Date: 02-09-08 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter Three
"I missed you." Awww. I so wanted him to tell her that, I've been waiting for it; and then he did. *melts* :D
So there was something between him and Jean... ew! LOL ;) I'm with Scott here... glad it didn't last long.
"A current of…something…flowed between." ... yeah, a current of RoLo! w00t! :D
Date: 02-09-08 - 12:38 pm Title: Chapter Three
Lmao! He's really really sweet.
if you say so.
HAHAHAHAHAH!!! sooo, i'm a little confused... does she still have a room there ot did they box up all her stuff and put it away? Is she in a guest room?
I would say hurry up with the next chapter but we're kinda busy this weekend... heehee
Date: 02-09-08 - 09:06 am Title: Chapter Three
I like your vibrant description of the physical and emotional attributes of the characters. This chapter definitely raised all kinds of tension within the story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter[s].
Date: 02-09-08 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter Three
Loves it. Continue continue!!!!
Date: 02-08-08 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Three
Wow...this story is simply brilliant. I love all of the rolo moments. Slow and sweet and powerful. Brilliant!
Date: 02-08-08 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Three
Oh dear, this absolutely made my day!
You keep doing great job with the character insight, I'm marvelled how those definitions fit.
Please, pretty please, write another chapter soon, I'm thrilled to see what's next.
true reader
C.t.Elder
Date: 02-08-08 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter Three
Grate chapter!!!! I look forward to your next update!!