[Report This]Date: 07-29-18 - 04:47 am Title: Search and Return
OMGOSH are you ever going to finish this. Unless that was the end...I HOPE NOT! I love what you did with the characters, and Logan, oh wow you did an amazing job with him. What a jerk, but you love him for it. Ewww Emma Frost! She's got to go. Please update and finish this.
:)
Date: 02-15-15 - 12:34 am Title: Search and Return
Finish it .
[Report This]Date: 05-23-08 - 01:58 am Title: Complications Arise
Nice. I have to smile because I always say only men in soap operas pass up sex when it's right there begging to be had but I liked this. In fact, I really enjoyed the ending. Again, nice.
[Report This]Date: 04-24-08 - 09:49 pm Title: Complications Arise
Steamy!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04-24-08 - 09:39 pm Title: Complications Arise
Love it Logan such an ass in this chapter and poor bobby Ororo should have kick both their asses.
[Report This]Date: 04-16-08 - 09:44 pm Title: Search and Return
Getting caught up on my "stories" slowly but surely. I was very intrigued with this chapter, the concept's fascinating. Ororo's on the run from her rich daddy and stripping, that just blows me away. What I liked most though was Logan. You write him well.
[Report This]Date: 04-06-08 - 04:02 pm Title: Tension
Oh my, I enjoyed the first chapter. How did I miss this? Well, I know how. I just don't usually read stuff with sexual situations. I was just checking what you'd written. I haven't finished this chapter yet, will over the week, am sending it to myself at work so I'll have something fun to do. I'll let you know what I think by next weekend most likely but so far it's quite fun only needs a little betaing.
[Report This]Date: 04-05-08 - 09:03 pm Title: Siblings
I love how both Ro and Logan what each other but how the both are too stubborn to do anything about it....lol I look forward to the next update hope its soon.
[Report This]Date: 03-25-08 - 05:23 pm Title: Tension
This is a good story. You should continue it
[Report This]Date: 03-10-08 - 05:28 pm Title: Tension
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review... I'm excited about where this story could go.
[Report This]Date: 03-04-08 - 03:31 pm Title: Search and Return
So good update
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. GLad you like!
[Report This]Date: 03-04-08 - 01:15 pm Title: Search and Return
I like it! Can't wait to read more : )
Author's Response: Wait no longer...more RoLo is here!Thanks for the review dear!
[Report This]Date: 03-03-08 - 07:13 pm Title: Search and Return
wahahahahaha!
I enjoyed this! Lots of great lines that had me cracking up. "I'm gonna go Jet Li on her ass." hee hee hee...
The scene when she's dancing reminds me slightly of "Convergence" by windrider1 on this site, and in a good way. Lots of humor and sex appeal at the same time. I loved this. It's funny, RoLo writers have a thing about writing strip scenes...I have one in While You Were Out, too.
There were bits of grammar and punctuation that could be fixed, but this was still very, very entertaining. Love the title. Keep it coming!!!
Author's Response: My inspiration for this story was based on that strip scene...I just loved it and thought wow...we need more strip scenes. I hate when people portray Jean as weak so i was like this woman could definetly take Emma Frost's weak ass. And I hate Emma more than any other character on Earth.
[Report This]Date: 03-03-08 - 03:59 pm Title: Search and Return
ok I'm hooked...
Author's Response: Glad to get you hooked....I enjoy doing that!
[Report This]Date: 03-03-08 - 01:56 pm Title: Search and Return
I can't wait for the next ch.
When he told her, “Darlin, you wouldn’t want me to own ya.” My mind just screamed " I do."
Update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: Lol, now you don't have to wait. I think that's one of the best lines so far.
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