great start!

Author's Response: Thanks!

I decided to re-read this chapter because a thought occurred to me. I remembered your comment on "sexiness appeal" the Logan in my story has. And I thinking maybe its easier for a male author to make male character have more of a sexy dialogue and female author can dote on their females the same way.

Because the way Ororo was talking to Logan in this chapter, she would make a good number of guys pudding in her hands. ^^

Just a little food for thought.

I still love this chapter though. Its a good springboard for the rest of the story. Because its interesting to see how hot for each other these two were in the first chapter and how they are at each others throats later chapters.

Author's Response: Ororo would turn guys into pudding? Cool. Best compliment for a characterization of a woman I've ever gotten, Brandon! Yes, female writers do dote on their female characters. I'm always afraid I make my men too sensitive or stretch their romantic impulses too far. I think that's why Eyes in the Dark was so much fun to write, Logan's pretty "male" in that one. Those two are still gonna be hot for each other, make no mistake, and they won't know what the heck to do about it.

This looks great! Update soon!

Author's Response: thanks, star. You too.

*sigh* that was so good. are you sure you're not ready to write orginals? anilar publishing would be a great start...

i'd live if this were a one-shot but i'd love it if there was more. it left me with a ton of questions that i'd love to have answered.

Author's Response: I haev questions of my own to answer with this fic, too. I'm not sure how to flesh out Logan's character yet. Thanks for reading and the nice review.

Loved it. This is the first piece of fan fic I've read in months(in any genre) and I enjoyed it. Your fics always make me hungry and horny. That's not a good thing when I'm PMSing, lol. More please...whenever you have the time, of course.

Author's Response: Heh. I'm bad about writing "PMS fic." Always too much food and sex in it, sometimes, a la Money Dance. Or pretty much any RoLo fic I write. I'm glad you picked this up and read it, Natira. Miss you! Hope you're doing well.

*fans herself* Damn, that was hot. :D
I take it that RoLo break of yours is over. Yay! :)

Author's Response: This was the story that I mentioned on my LJ that I was tempted not to bother with, so I'm glad you got to read it, Steph! it's hard sometimes to try to write a plot around a sex scene when the scene digs its teeth in and won't let go til you put it on paper. There was no way I could have worked up to this one with an actual plot. NO way.

Look, you brought me out of hibernation to review... This was decadent. wicked and read through twice (by me anyway!) lol. More?? **bats lashes**

Author's Response: *bows and prostrates* I'm not worthy! I'm not worthy! I missed you, Hobbins. Wicked was what I was going for. I don't want fluff like I usually write with the slow buildup. This will move backwards. More angst, more sex, and more of the awkward moments I can't seem to avoid. It ain't gonna be Money Dance or Never Been or Rubbing Me the Wrong Way, this much I can promise. Eyes in the Dark woke up my dark side, I don't know why. Thanks for reading.