Love, love, love the use of Monica and Stevie! Yes! Who uses Stevie? I liked her so much in the day. Well wirtten as always, what more can I say? You write so well, really make the characters light up. The only problem I have, and this is probably an age thing, is that I don't know some of the things they say in your stories. What is "Kick down"? I'm assuming it means show me? And on the other hand I like little things like when Ororo said she beat feet. You humanize the X-Men. I'm glad I caught this on the second chapter maybe I'll be able to keep up this time. I hate it when I get behind, so hard to get caught up.

Author's Response: I'm chuckling and blushing, Darlene! Yeah, "kick down" is one of my husband's phrases that he taught me when we got together, and it does basically mean "give me some." I had a plate of something I was eating, and he said "hey, I see you holding back, kick down with some of that!" I was like, "What?" And "beat feet" is one of my mom's favorites. I borrow a lot of Mom's buzz words when I write, just because I like them, and I kinda want to keep them in circulation. It will take me a while to update. Logan's life is under the microscope next, and they will eventually meet again. And it will be very, very awkward.

I like the story. Its got alot of promise with a sitcom drama kind of feel to it

Author's Response: goodie. thanks!! sometimes I like writing things that feel like a sitcom or a movie.