maddie has got 2 go!!!!

Author's Response: she won't do much damage, don't worry! she's relatively harmless.

My god i feel bad, I had to do a Google search for Jackson Pollack.

Anyway, can't tell you how much I was looking forward to this update. *Sigh* Scott, Scott, Scott, a dangerous game you play. It's funny, because it had the desired effect, I'm just glad Ororo wasn't receptive and Scott picked that up right away. I'm sure that didn't make Logan's knuckles tighten any less though.

And Logan, you wuss. Just could not let Maddie down gently, but then again, she was borderline desperate anyway. In all of this I almost feel bad for her. At least Scott's aware of what's going on between Logan and Ororo. Maddie's just making herself blind to Logan's general disinterest.

I also love how we finally find out what occurred with Jean. You gave us hints along the way, but there wasn't anything clear cut. I feel bad for Sara because it seems like she really does need help cooping, but it almost seems like she's doing more harm than good, renewing the pain within Logan.

She probably should consider a date with Scott, if anything it would get her mind off of things. Plus he's a good guy, I know he'll treat her right. But I suppose there is a time thing, with her divorce and coupled with her still cooping with Jean's death.

Anyway, good chapter lass.

Author's Response: Scott's funny. He's actually a good friend, he's just getting Logan's goat. Maddie's making herself blind, but Logan is waffling. There's a LOT more going on with Jean's history and why it makes Logan the way he is. Being a widow is one thing, but his marriage was rocky. Sara wants to help. Things will brighten soon. But she needs to help herself first. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

An awesome chapter, as expected. I like how you're easing into the back stories of the two characters. I can't wait until the both really come together.

Totally loving the little jealous tid bits going on between Ororo and Logan. Scott better watch out he's walking a fine line of being gutted.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: There will be more of Ororo's back story soon, too. There was a lot going on between her and Victor back in the day that shapes how she feels about Logan. Scott knows he's that close to being filleted, but he has more leeway to mess with him than most folks, being his best friend and all. Thanks for reading, Jewel!!

Oh good Goddess you updated! I actually screamed when I saw this. I haven't read the chapter yet, but i'm sure it's fantastic. A perfect end to a perfect day.

Thank you for this!

Author's Response: you're welcome, girl. I have another update in progress, goodness knows when it will be up. you know me, my inconsistent and lazy self...