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Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-08 - 02:20 am Title: Meetings

Great chapter!!!!!! I love the part were they recognized each other. that part was really funny..........

Author's Response: good, it was funny in my mind when I pictured it. thanks!

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-08 - 01:54 am Title: Meetings

Oh no!!! It was all going so well!! :(
Ack! Plz update asap! I'm REALLY liking this one!!!!

Author's Response: I'm so behind with updating any of my RoLo that it's pitiful, but I'm so glad you're enjoying this. Thanks!

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-23-08 - 07:38 pm Title: Messages

so... um... wait, what? I feel as if I missed something... his mother?

Author's Response: Yup, his mother. More importantly, the pics are all he has LEFT of his mother. Hint, hint.

Reviewer: starnoble03 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-23-08 - 03:46 am Title: Wishes

This looks great! Update soon!

Author's Response: thanks, star. You too.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-23-08 - 01:05 am Title: Messages

A while before you updated, eh? Lol. I'm really glad I checked today anyway. I liked this chapter, full of details of Logan's life though you didn't go into them in depth, just enough to whet our appetite. And hey you're always welcome.

Author's Response: good. I know I tend to overdescribe sometimes or make too long of a chapter, so this is a tiny break from that habit. I want Logan to be interesting beyond just being hard, jaded and world-weary. Guy has a tough past that left its mark on him, and I'm still figuring out what it is.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-22-08 - 01:16 am Title: Hangovers in Coach Class

Love, love, love the use of Monica and Stevie! Yes! Who uses Stevie? I liked her so much in the day. Well wirtten as always, what more can I say? You write so well, really make the characters light up. The only problem I have, and this is probably an age thing, is that I don't know some of the things they say in your stories. What is "Kick down"? I'm assuming it means show me? And on the other hand I like little things like when Ororo said she beat feet. You humanize the X-Men. I'm glad I caught this on the second chapter maybe I'll be able to keep up this time. I hate it when I get behind, so hard to get caught up.

Author's Response: I'm chuckling and blushing, Darlene! Yeah, "kick down" is one of my husband's phrases that he taught me when we got together, and it does basically mean "give me some." I had a plate of something I was eating, and he said "hey, I see you holding back, kick down with some of that!" I was like, "What?" And "beat feet" is one of my mom's favorites. I borrow a lot of Mom's buzz words when I write, just because I like them, and I kinda want to keep them in circulation. It will take me a while to update. Logan's life is under the microscope next, and they will eventually meet again. And it will be very, very awkward.

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-20-08 - 03:32 pm Title: Hangovers in Coach Class

Update soon, you got my interest. ;)

Author's Response: Goodie! I'm glad. I hope I keep your interest in this story, and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: stormcrow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-08 - 11:40 pm Title: Hangovers in Coach Class

I like the story. Its got alot of promise with a sitcom drama kind of feel to it

Author's Response: goodie. thanks!! sometimes I like writing things that feel like a sitcom or a movie.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-08 - 09:25 pm Title: Hangovers in Coach Class

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.


Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it! I'll try. As usual. Lots of stuff going on. That's why my updates were shorter this week.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-16-08 - 09:42 pm Title: Wishes

I saw this last weekend but didn't get a chance to read it, thought it might just be pwp. How pleasantly suprised I was! this was really, really good. I imagined it would be just smut - why? Of course I don't expect anything bad from you. I really love the ending to this chapter makes me really want the second one ASAP so I hope you update soon.

Btw, I haven't finished that extra long chapter you wrote for It's All Coming Back to Me much to my regret. I will though. Life's been a bit busy of late and I'm limited to computer time as I'm borrowing. I guess that rebate check's going towards an Apple so I won't have to worry about all the PC problesm. ;D

Author's Response: I wish I could get a Mac, too. I hate my Gateway with a passion, but I might settle for getting more memory for it. This was smutty, but I wanted to focus on some of the stuff going on between them, too, and the story they will each have to tell when this is over. The first chapter was Logan-centric. The title of the story is pretty telling, that both of them are running from their pasts, bad relationships, tragedy, blah blah blah...the usual angst from me. Starting this with a vacation romp had to happen. I almost never, NEVER toss sex into the first chapter unless its a oneshot PWP. I like to work up to it. But again, they had sex. Chances are, they won't "make love" until much, much later. Thanks for reading this, and the other chapter. I was hoping you would get to, just because I know you like old Claremont stories as much as I do. Take it easy, Darlene.

Reviewer: shan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-12-08 - 03:18 am Title: Wishes

*sigh* that was so good. are you sure you're not ready to write orginals? anilar publishing would be a great start...

i'd live if this were a one-shot but i'd love it if there was more. it left me with a ton of questions that i'd love to have answered.

Author's Response: I haev questions of my own to answer with this fic, too. I'm not sure how to flesh out Logan's character yet. Thanks for reading and the nice review.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-08 - 12:05 am Title: Wishes

Second attempt at reviewing. Delicious and visually gratifying. i look forward to more, but it makes an enticing one shot.

Author's Response: visually gratifying! That's the most awesome compliment, thank you!! Man. I thought about making this a one-shot. But there are too many questions. Who is she? Why did she run out so quickly? Does he really mind, or was he just shocked? And why was Scott worried about him being too hard? We'll see. I have other fics that are screaming to be completed more than this one is to be continued. But again, thanks!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-08 - 11:26 pm Title: Wishes

Loved it. This is the first piece of fan fic I've read in months(in any genre) and I enjoyed it. Your fics always make me hungry and horny. That's not a good thing when I'm PMSing, lol. More please...whenever you have the time, of course.

Author's Response: Heh. I'm bad about writing "PMS fic." Always too much food and sex in it, sometimes, a la Money Dance. Or pretty much any RoLo fic I write. I'm glad you picked this up and read it, Natira. Miss you! Hope you're doing well.

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-08 - 09:59 pm Title: Wishes

Whew! Is it hot in here or is it just me?
I love the realistic feel of your stories.
Lovely...straight up lovely my dear : )

Author's Response: yay! Thanks for the wonderful review, I loved it.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-08 - 08:00 pm Title: Wishes

*fans herself* Damn, that was hot. :D
I take it that RoLo break of yours is over. Yay! :)

Author's Response: This was the story that I mentioned on my LJ that I was tempted not to bother with, so I'm glad you got to read it, Steph! it's hard sometimes to try to write a plot around a sex scene when the scene digs its teeth in and won't let go til you put it on paper. There was no way I could have worked up to this one with an actual plot. NO way.

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