[Report This]Date: 03-19-09 - 07:44 am Title: Wait a Minute…What?!?
I thought id reviewed the last couple of chapters but for some reason they haven't been going through on my phone.
Anywho, loved both updates. I giggled like crazy at Madelyne finding Logan's gag gift for Ororo and I understand Logan's shock at finding Ororo in Scott's office instead of Scott. Been there and the shock was followed by a 'fucking hell!' Did Scott change offices?
Update, update, update. Don't forget Focus!
Author's Response: I haven't forgotten Focus, I promise! It's just sitting on the back burner until I find my "focus" again with what I was gonna do with it. I hate it when people move offices unexpectedly, too, or at least I did when I had an office job. Thanks for visiting me!
[Report This]Date: 03-19-09 - 05:47 am Title: Wait a Minute…What?!?
You're on a roll hon.
Next chapter is really going to be very interesting. I really took special note that how Logan compared Maddie to Ororo and now Jean. That actually show's a bit of progress on his end.
I honestly can't wait to see what you do next with this. I can honestly see how Scott could have a field day with this.
Author's Response: That bit with him thinking about Ororo was actually a little premature on my part, since Ororo stll drives him crazy for bad reasons! But I want him to start opening up to the thought of her beyond the chemistry they have. Scott's gonna definitely have a field day with this.
[Report This]Date: 03-18-09 - 09:01 pm Title: My Funny Valentine
Nosy little somethin'. I'm glad she's gone lol
But I love Scott in this... can I have him?
I can't wait to see Ororo's reaction to the gift!!
Author's Response: Poor Maddie! Her only fault was being overeager and in the way! Ororo won't see the gift quite yet, but I promise it will show up once again. Scott is being vindicated for all the times that I've ever written him as annoying. You can borrow him!
[Report This]Date: 03-17-09 - 01:07 am Title: My Funny Valentine
Oh snaps Cee! Once again i'm completly obsorbed into a story you've written and i didn't even know it was you!!! Your friggin awsome dude! Props chika :D
Author's Response: thanks, Fri!!!
[Report This]Date: 03-16-09 - 05:46 pm Title: My Funny Valentine
HAHAHAHAHA Conservative. Means: No kinky shit. BWAHAHAHA. Nice one, Cee! Thanks for helping me enjoy my lunch while at work. Mooooooore.
Author's Response: No kinky shit...exactly!!! *heeheehee*
[Report This]Date: 03-16-09 - 05:41 pm Title: My Funny Valentine
LOL! OH MY GOD That was unbelievably awesome!
I was sitting here thinking how was he going to get out of this and 'if' he was going to get out of this. The handcuffs, priceless. And lets be honest here, five months down the line, Maddie probably would have welcomed the handcuffs. Either way, Bravo!
Now we need Scott to play matchmaker and get Tory and Logan together.
Also, I have to say you've done it again. Here is another story were I love Jean's character. I love the subtle way she and Logan got together. I mean Logan said he only wanted a mate, but she pretty much was his best friend. I'd even go as far to say that it was a shame she's no longer living.
Author's Response: Those handcuffs were just begging to be written into this story. But I figured if he had gone through with sending them to her, she would hvae had him fired for office harrassment...this option seemed the safer bet. Yeah, five months might have made a difference in changing Maddie's tune, huh? Good point, B. Jean isn't the cock-blocking, two-faced vixen she often is in RoLo fic in this story. I dont like always having Logan choose Ororo after he's grown tired of chasing Jean, that's been done before. He should be with Ororo because he likes her best! But yes, I want Jean to be likable. She deserves it!
[Report This]Date: 03-06-09 - 01:02 am Title: Buffet Line
maddie has got 2 go!!!!
Author's Response: she won't do much damage, don't worry! she's relatively harmless.
[Report This]Date: 03-05-09 - 04:59 pm Title: Buffet Line
More More More!! Finish it. I'm waiting here.
Author's Response: I'm workin' on it, I'm workin' on it!
[Report This]Date: 03-05-09 - 01:37 pm Title: Buffet Line
My god i feel bad, I had to do a Google search for Jackson Pollack.
Anyway, can't tell you how much I was looking forward to this update. *Sigh* Scott, Scott, Scott, a dangerous game you play. It's funny, because it had the desired effect, I'm just glad Ororo wasn't receptive and Scott picked that up right away. I'm sure that didn't make Logan's knuckles tighten any less though.
And Logan, you wuss. Just could not let Maddie down gently, but then again, she was borderline desperate anyway. In all of this I almost feel bad for her. At least Scott's aware of what's going on between Logan and Ororo. Maddie's just making herself blind to Logan's general disinterest.
I also love how we finally find out what occurred with Jean. You gave us hints along the way, but there wasn't anything clear cut. I feel bad for Sara because it seems like she really does need help cooping, but it almost seems like she's doing more harm than good, renewing the pain within Logan.
She probably should consider a date with Scott, if anything it would get her mind off of things. Plus he's a good guy, I know he'll treat her right. But I suppose there is a time thing, with her divorce and coupled with her still cooping with Jean's death.
Anyway, good chapter lass.
Author's Response: Scott's funny. He's actually a good friend, he's just getting Logan's goat. Maddie's making herself blind, but Logan is waffling. There's a LOT more going on with Jean's history and why it makes Logan the way he is. Being a widow is one thing, but his marriage was rocky. Sara wants to help. Things will brighten soon. But she needs to help herself first. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 03-05-09 - 11:27 am Title: Buffet Line
An awesome chapter, as expected. I like how you're easing into the back stories of the two characters. I can't wait until the both really come together.
Totally loving the little jealous tid bits going on between Ororo and Logan. Scott better watch out he's walking a fine line of being gutted.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I love writing arguments! You wouldn't think I would have so much "material" to harvest from, since I haev such a harmonious life...*rolls eyes* Scott will escape being filleted! Barely.
[Report This]Date: 03-05-09 - 11:26 am Title: Buffet Line
An awesome chapter, as expected. I like how you're easing into the back stories of the two characters. I can't wait until the both really come together.
Totally loving the little jealous tid bits going on between Ororo and Logan. Scott better watch out he's walking a fine line of being gutted.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: There will be more of Ororo's back story soon, too. There was a lot going on between her and Victor back in the day that shapes how she feels about Logan. Scott knows he's that close to being filleted, but he has more leeway to mess with him than most folks, being his best friend and all. Thanks for reading, Jewel!!
[Report This]Date: 03-05-09 - 11:25 am Title: Buffet Line
An awesome chapter, as expected. I like how you're easing into the back stories of the two characters. I can't wait until the both really come together.
Totally loving the little jealous tid bits going on between Ororo and Logan. Scott better watch out he's walking a fine line of being gutted.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: ...and it was so nice you reviewed it twice! hahaha... just kiddin'.
[Report This]Date: 03-05-09 - 09:39 am Title: Buffet Line
Oh good Goddess you updated! I actually screamed when I saw this. I haven't read the chapter yet, but i'm sure it's fantastic. A perfect end to a perfect day.
Thank you for this!
Author's Response: you're welcome, girl. I have another update in progress, goodness knows when it will be up. you know me, my inconsistent and lazy self...
[Report This]Date: 03-04-09 - 01:21 am Title: Catch Me When You Can
I love this story! It is by far one of the best!
Author's Response: aw, thanks! Glad you're enjoying it so far!
[Report This]Date: 02-09-09 - 11:37 pm Title: Catch Me When You Can
oooo, thats a scrap! lol
Author's Response: yeah! It's on, now!
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