[Report This]Date: 09-24-08 - 11:34 pm Title: Something Dark
Holy Hell, what a chapter!! And Yum, to the Logan/Ororo action. It was hot, hard and intense. Just like them! You have a style that flows exceptionally well. No overdone narratives, but enough to firmly ensconce the reader into the story, while at the same time giving enough leeway for imagination to take hold and make them a PART of the story. That's a rare and wonderful talent. more soon, I hope.
Author's Response: Wow thanks a ton Windy those compliments made me lightheaded , i am such a big fan of yours i got the whole fanboy thing going now lol thanks again and more will be coming soon
[Report This]Date: 09-24-08 - 06:17 pm Title: Something Dark
Wow......wow :)
Author's Response: lol i hope that means ya liked it lol thanks a lot :)
[Report This]Date: 09-24-08 - 05:13 pm Title: Something Dark
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks lad ya liked it update be comin soon
[Report This]Date: 09-24-08 - 03:08 pm Title: Something Dark
Hi! Glad you got the chapter. A few of the revisions look like they didn't erase the old errors, the inserted punctuation is just next to the bits t hat were supposed to be taken out, but that's because of a difference in the Word I used and yours, I think. You had it saved as a .wps file, and it kept messing with the formatting when I used the revision tool! But, most of it took.
Great chapter, Chet. I love the dark feel and the imagery, since you know I'm a stickler for surreal environments and characters. Hope you like the working title I used for the chapter, I just needed a filename to save it under. Those words jumped out at me when I read them.
Author's Response: Thanks Cee :) sorry bout the trouble with the beta thanks for everything you did with it though and yes i loved the working title it really jumped at me it was so simple but straight to the heart i loved it thanks again
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