Date: 10-18-08 - 06:49 pm Title: A Road Paved with Bones
“Keep your prayers bub, I’m the meanest mother fucker in this valley.”
I Loved that line lol!!!
Great update
Date: 10-18-08 - 03:02 pm Title: A Road Paved with Bones
I always love Emma coming around to stir things up, and I love how she rushed right in to scope him out and sample him. I also love the effect it had on Ororo to resume their game, he's already affecting her and making her act bad. Ororo's interesting when she's bad. Poor Hank! At least he got a kiss! The hunting scene was great, it always brings to mind the old Uncanny Claremont issues when he's just doing what comes naturally, except he isn't just reaching out to touch a skittish doe, he's actually going after dinner this time! Good work.
Date: 10-18-08 - 02:14 pm Title: A Road Paved with Bones
I dig the sexual tension VERY much. I want him to hammer Ro like a railroad spike. :) I'm glad she's not gonna back down. Please update soon.
Date: 10-16-08 - 02:59 am Title: A Road Paved with Bones
uh-ohhhh.....
I do think emma is biting off more than she can chew!
this is really good. I love how you emphasized the darkness of logan's inner self.
more, please!