Reviews For On a Blade's Edge
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Reviewer: black_rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 04-01-09 - 05:44 pm Title: Trigger
Date: 04-01-09 - 05:44 pm Title: Trigger
“Did you know there was no alarm?”
“Yep the very second no siren started blaring after I made the cut.”
Flipping hilarious!! That got me laughing. xD Awesome work, keep it up!
Reviewer: Cee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04-01-09 - 02:53 pm Title: Trigger
Date: 04-01-09 - 02:53 pm Title: Trigger
Chet's BACK!!! YAY!
Too many zingers to count, I chuckled my way through this. Don't worry overmuch about this needing a beta, the sentence structures were good, it's only punctuation that needs tweaking, but it was still a great read. I was just thinking about you and your stories yesterday! I love the war lingo and the idea of Logan as a soldier in WWII. No one does that with him. And adding Rose in this as one of his phantoms(?) was genius.
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