Oh my! Noooo Logan don't leave lol!
Great Chapter :)

Author's Response: Hehehehee! Thanks! And thanks for the review!

Ah. RoLoness = goodness but what's up with Forge?

I like how you didn’t immediately have Logan going on missions and instead he was offered the chance to go along as an observer. For some reason to me that is it makes more sense than suiting him up, as reluctant as he is & certainly was in the first movie. I like your version better. Forgive me for saying it’s disturbing to me about Jubilee and the other young girls fantasizing about Logan but it's probably because I never ever see that in the comics since they view him more as a father figure. I know movie Rogue (oh how I hate her) seemed to have a stupid crush on him and you’re just following in the line but it’s still disturbing – to me – nonetheless. I suppose I just dislike the movie teens because a lot of them don’t mesh with the comics so it’s nothing against your story it’s just me needing to vent. I’ll end this by saying something I've already said, I really like your Logan especially his banter with Scott.

Author's Response: I just want to comment on the thing about the girls...Since neither of them have that fatherly type of relationship with Logan in the story thus far as well as the movie. It then turns to your basic school girl crush type of thing. But I do recall Jubilee harbored a crush on Logan from the comics I've read recently. It wasn't as apparent as the one in my story. But it was present. To be honest, I was just trying to make things fun and Jubilee being the eccentric but having such an obvious crush on Logan, i thought it was fun.

Maybe I’ve been watching a little too much Ninja Warrior but that’s how I imagined Logan going through the gauntlet. I love that show so that's a compliment. I really enjoyed Scott’s wake up call, had me me chuckling. This is getting better and better now that they’re at the mansion.

For some reason the way men right Ororo always intrigues me most especially the way you describe her, her eyes, her color, dipped in caramel, quite different. I actually like that, the different take although if I’m assuming wrong, that you’re a guy and you’re not excuse me please.

I like Peter here, like the resentfulness of Ororo too. In fact for some reason I can’t quite peg this story always makes me smile. I think I also read that in one of your other reviews and I thought ‘her too!’ assuming the reviewer’s a she.

Author's Response: Well yea, its weird. Something I noticed that some woman can often describe Logan perfectly because they have a good depiction of what is considered an attractive male and they play up to that with their description of him. Since I'm a male, I kinda do the same thing but with a woman's image instead. I tried to give Ororo an exotic look to her. Beautiful but someone that if you saw her walking down the street guys would be like "whoa..." A striking person that stands out. The almond eyes description i drew from Uncanny series how sometimes Ororo is drawn with Egyptian like lashes and slightly slanted eyes. They make her look so beautiful sometimes in the comic that i had to depict it here. And it makes it easy to understand why Logan got swept up under her spell. I liked having Peter as one of the main group because after Logan and Scott, Pete's one of my favorite male X-Men. And he hardly had any camera time in the films which sucked because he's a cool character. And they should have had a Colossus vs Juggernaut fight in the movie. I've constantly been thinking of this story as my way to correct some of the errors that the movie made. It's been a fun ride so far. ^^

Plenty of action this chapter. You know your style reminds me a little of Stormcrow, you both go in and out of past and present tense. And you both have decidedly different takes on the movies which I’m not a fan of. Perhaps that’s why I’ve continued reading your story.

Author's Response: I haven't read any of Stormcrow's work, but I've always been pretty decent with action in my stories. One of the first series I wrote (under a different author name) was a major action story. So it comes natural. Doing a super hero story was an interesting challenge because everyone is used to the panels of how so and so fights. And since the movies did a poor job of displaying Logan's abilities, I had to be a bit more creative with all of what he can do. For a first attempt I think i did ok.

I have to be honest and admit that I love this fic and I get this goofy grin on my face whenever I see and update. I was hoping to read something good tonight and you gave it to me. Hoping you'll get lots of reviews and inspiration to crank our another update real soon. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Heeheehee! Thank you! I'm glad you've been enjoying the ride. A lot more is in store for everyone, also I should have the next chapter up soon. I have a good deal of it worked out already, but till then.

I'm not a fan of the movies much at all but your retelling has more depth.

Author's Response: Thank you Darlin! Been working hard on keeping the story interesting as well as a bit more involved than the movies. If there ever were such a wasted opportunity for greatness it was those movies.