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Reviewer: kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-11-08 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Danger Room pt. 1

Woo hoo! Go Logan!! The ending was crazy. I could just feel the emotion and drive that was running through Logan/beast as he made his way through. Love the rolo conflicting feelings of lust and distrust (for lack of a better word) good chapter

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. That chapter was such a frustrating deal with me. I was plagued by much of the writers block, not to mention it was supposed to be so much longer. But fear not, I should have another chapter up in about two days or so. I love Ororo because she's in such a particular position right now. She has an obvious attraction to Logan, but she's also that dangerous distrustful side that's she's worried about. Its somewhat of a head versus heart type of thing. Which promotes great inner conflict between the two. Thanks for reading! ^^

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-09-08 - 02:34 am Title: Chapter 7: The Danger Room pt. 1

*It was stupid, made him feel like a sexually confused Batman or something.*

That line killed me! LOL! I couldn't stop laughing LOL!!!

I too would have liked to see their spin on the original uniforms in the movie but they ended up with all that hot ass leather :(

Author's Response: Yea I know, I read that Stan Lee understood the decision not to include the teams uniforms in the official movie. But the look is part of the fun for the whole thing. I mean I don't think the first Spider-Man dressed in all black leather would have been as a cool movie.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-08-08 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Danger Room pt. 1

yeah, ya gotta love that about Logan. Classic yellow suit.

This was a fun chapter. Bring it on, let's have some more.

Author's Response: Yea that was one of the things I had a problem with the movie. The X-Men costumes didn't seem like costumes, more like they were mutant rockers with all leather.

Reviewer: storms rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-02-08 - 12:41 am Title: Chapter 6: Day One

LOves it!!! Please keep up the great work. i'm loving the characters especially ro & lo.

Jubilee and kids are cute!

is it just me or is rogue a worrying character overall...tad bit clingy (but not w/o her reasons!!!)??? according to this timeline she's known him max week and a 1/2 to 2 weeks.

anyway cant wait to see how it all turns out

Author's Response: Hmmm... Well I have to say everyone's been commenting on Rogue's affections towards Logan. I don't' really want to say too much, because it will spoil things, but Rogue's actually gone through a lot in her past a lot of things that haven't been revealed yet. That plus, she's a young girl and Logan's has a sexy tough guy image, that a lot of young girls couldn't help but fall for. I mean he picked her up took care of her. Promised to protect her, then showed he was true to his word, with his fight with Sabertooth. Each one of those acts cemented more in Rogue's mind the validity of her affections for Logan. I mentioned before the Jubilee and Kitty scenes was one of my more favorite parts to write. Ororo/Logan and Jean/Logan were a close second. Although thanks for reading. I'm trying to crank out these chapters as soon as i can. ^^

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-28-08 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 6: Day One

I love this story. The scene at the end with Rogue and Logan was cute, even though she was a bit too cozy... but I can't blame her lol

Now if only 'Ro would relax just a tiny bit...

Author's Response: Give 'Ro some time. Logan didn't exactly come off as prince charming when the first met nor is he doing much to change that impression too. Rogue I'm not going to comment on just yet. Just know she cares a whole lot about Logan at this time I'm not going to go into specifics of how much. Thank you for reading, I'm glad so many people are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Xntrk1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-27-08 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 6: Day One

Niiiice. Keep up the good work; I'd love to read more.

You have the characters down to a T!

xD

Author's Response: Oh thanks! You don't know how much that means to me. I'm always boarderline paranoid that I'm making anyone Out of Character. And it doesn't help that this is my first official X-Men story too. D= But thanks again. Keep a look out because things are gonna be picking up in the next few chapters. ^^

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-25-08 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 6: Day One

Awesome near miss with Jean. It was hot. Rogue sure is getting cozy, though.

Author's Response: Means the no miss Storm one will be even hotter. ^^ And Rogue...Hee,hee,hee... I'm not gonna comment on that.

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-25-08 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter 6: Day One

'He tried to ignore all these things but a man was only so strong.'

Tsk Tsk Tsk... Dude's already got it bad *giggles*
Great Chapter

Author's Response: Ya, its terrible the hell, the *right* woman can do to a man. ^^ Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-21-08 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 5: First Impressions

Man, please continue soon, i'm really loving this


Author's Response: Heeheehee! I'm glad you're enjoying it, you would be surprised I'm enjoying writing it. Heck, i don't know all of what's going to happen my damn self. Ideas keep coming to me for future chapters while I'm writing these. One thing I can say, I've been pretty good about updating, so stay tuned!

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-19-08 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 5: First Impressions

Perfect. I love his reaction to Jean, with how he could have some fun with that one later. You could see that in his face in the movie, too. And I like him meeting Colossus! No one does that!

Author's Response: Yea initially when I was starting to write this I was planning out who I wanted to be in the story, because i always felt that just four X-men in the first movie was such a small cast for a superhero group. So I decided to add Colossus, especially since Pete's such a good guy anyway.

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-13-08 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 4: Rivals

I love a good story that can make me feel a slew of emotions.

I went from being on the edge of my seat and almost doing the Ned Flanders faint (lol!) to happiness.

Good job,. I loved the updates and I hope to see more when you get time :)

Author's Response: ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it. This chapter was fun for me because the beginning I was trying to make it as much as suspense thriller as possible. Then it turned to an full blown action movie with a nice fight scene between Logan and Sabs. Then a tiny bit of pre RoLo-ness at the end. I'm writing as lot these days so there should be another chapter up soon.

Reviewer: CeeCee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-09-08 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 4: Rivals

I love it. No, I'm not wondering why you updated again so soon! I'm wondering when the next one is forthcoming! When I update my fic in short order and have my chapters closely one after the other, sometimes my new chapters don't get read because people don't realize they're there, but I don't think you'll have that problem. I love your take on Vic.

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment on Vic, I was trying to lean more towards the Comic/90's cartoon version of Creed. That guy's more sadistic and a lot more talkative than the movie Sabertooth. Plus I finally got to my first fight! I r happy! This is where things are going to deviate greatly from the movie.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-06-08 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: Dreams

This was excellent. I like the quiet friendship between Ororo and Scott. Your rendition of Logan's rebirth in the tank was well done, particularly how Logan relied on his senses even under sedation. It really felt like I was reading Weapon X instead of just watching the movie, yet I was still seeing Hugh in the tank.

Author's Response: I have to say again thank you. Ororo and Scott at first was hard to approached because I know I wanted a scene between them but for a while no dialogue would come to me. But then a day when i had more time at work then i could imagine everything just sort of came to me. The weapon X part I loved doing because I've read a lot of stories that always say how torturous Logan's nightmares were I wanted to take it a step further and actually show some of what those nightmares were. As well as give some what of a live perspective.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-06-08 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 3: Dreams

I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.

Author's Response: I'm actually amazed I got this chapter finished so fast. But it was like every time I had some free time on my hands I was writing or making sure I wrote something for the day. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-02-08 - 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 2: Humanities

Even when he's in a bad mood, Logan's a big softy when the situation calls for it. Logan's a bad ass, but he also has a sensitive side. Keep the updates coming!

Author's Response: Yeah, you're right. But I always like to think of Logan as badass first softy an extreme second. ^^ Thanks for reading!

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