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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-31-08 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 2: Humanities

This had me in stitches:

Despite the fact he was always real good at healing, he still didn’t want to risk his hand getting caught in the girl’s feeding frenzy. The poor Slim Jims never had a chance.

Priceless. Another fantastic chapter.

Author's Response: Heehee! I'm glad you liked that. It's funny every time I see that part in the original movie, I always pictured Wolverine thinking that in the back of his mind. Because she really goes to town on whatever that was he gave her. Stay tuned for next chapter, that's when the fun really starts. ^^

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-30-08 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 2: Humanities

Awww Logan's turning into a big ol' softie. I loved this chapter :)

Author's Response: LOL! Oh, the next chapter will make you rethink that. ^^

Reviewer: Purple Jade Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-08 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beast

I really like this story. And even though I kind of knew what was suppose to happen, you still had me carefully reading each word, cause that's how good it was.
Great job. I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Yea i know one of the fun things about doing remakes of other works is the surprises you can throw in to make someone else's story your own.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-08 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beast

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Woot! Thanks for reading and reviewing! ^^

Reviewer: Onyx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-19-08 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beast

Loved it! I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Author's Response: Well thank you! I can't wait to get the next chapters finished! Thanks for reading. ^^

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-18-08 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beast

For some reason it seems like I have read this before. Have you posted anywhere else?

Anyway,this was really good. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Err...I posted on FF.net earlier today besides that no. And thanks I hope to get the next chapter out soon.

Reviewer: kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-18-08 - 04:58 pm Title: Prologue- First Blood

Interesting....I don't think I've read Logan depicted quite this way before.

Author's Response: Errr...I hope that's a good thing. I'm trying to redo a few things. I was trying for a more deadlier, unstable Wolverine that slowly takes the steps to become the guy we've all grown to love. ^^

Reviewer: CeeCee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-18-08 - 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beast

*applauds, stamps feet*

This was AWESOME. The first person narrative of the last chapter and the descriptions in this one slayed me. So help me, the image of the guy attacking him at the bar was perfect. You can tell it was an older guy from the High Karate cologne, my mom used to talk about that stuff. So did Bill Cosby, I think. I just love the feel this has already, dark and intense. Great work.

Author's Response: Heeheehee, Thanks! This scene was one of my favorite scenes from the first film so i had to up a notch. Next two chapters have some scenes from the movie slightly altered as well. One part I really can't wait to get to. ^^

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