Sweet and fluffy. Kendall is easily presented without having to go into past detail. Instead we hit the ground running and are introduced to a character who is already established. Her interaction with her father is classic and the hard line drawing Wolverine proves he's still got with a gentle but firm statement.

Ororo is also well described and her POV gives us a better insight into Kendal's character and her own love for her child.

There were no flaws in this chapter. It is a masterpiece

Author's Response: He's a big softie. With hard edges. Thank you for the praise! I'm glad you took the time to read and review.