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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-29-08 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 3: Kitchen Talk And The Kenyan Inquisition

I loved this:

Stupid sneaky kid with his sneaky senses of sneakiness.

That's cute. This chapter was good anyway. Can't wait to see what happened with Ro's ex...I have a feeling I know who it is! *dances*

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed reading my scribblings. Kendall is great fun to write and using her voice, it gives me a break from trying to match Our Heroes' speech with the dialogue from comics. I think the well-known ex will make an appearance eventually, if not in this fic then certainly in the future. It'll be interesting to see Kendall put two and two together then.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-08 - 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 3: Kitchen Talk And The Kenyan Inquisition

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: The next chapters are well in the works and something should definitely be up soon. Shame that my muse tends to meander from one point of this AU's timeline to a completely different ones... Right now I should be concentrating on chapter five but she's pushing plotbunnies that hop around about fifteen years before the Christmas of this story. *sigh*

Reviewer: Orogan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-08 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 3: Kitchen Talk And The Kenyan Inquisition

Having just read the first three chapters of this story, I must say that you have done a fantastic job of it! I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

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